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Reviews For: The Return

dreamshell 2007-06-23 ch 1,	abuseI must say, this is pretty impressive. I like the dreary feeling that the rainy day brings as well as the mundane mood that you start off with. And the walking cane does a good job of expressing with a visual what kind of things must've gone on for Revan while she was away. However, I am a little irked about Carth's inability to put two and two together. I suppose he's probably tucked his hope of ever seeing Revan again somewhere out of the way, but one would think he'd start to suspect something. There's another thing I hope you wouldn't mind if I brought up. Maybe it's unfair to ask you specifically, but it's a question I've come to really want to get an answer to; Why do female Revans always seem to cry at some point? I mean, obviously I'm speaking somewhat generally, but I've seen it happen quite a bit. Is there something I'm not getting? I mean, I am a guy and I guess there's tons of baggage that comes with that in relation to crying and all, but I just don't see a Revan of any gender just breaking down and sobbing. Least of all infront of someone. But I guess it's my lack of the feminine perspective (not being sarcastic, I swear). Sorry if that last bit makes me sound like an *. I'm just curious. I very much love strong female characters (and their real-life counterparts) and Revan has some awesome potential to be one. Unfortunately, I only ever see female Revans that cry or angst. And if not that, ones that have an annoying faux-sassiness or attempts to come off as a cutesy badass (see: Mira). Where's the real* female Revan? --dreamshell--
Rarecase 2007-05-19 ch 1,	abuseGood story. I like how you mentioned the fact that Carth should be happy-it shows that he's not. (If that makes sense... :P) If you have the time, you should continue it... it has a lot of potential.
DaDoozer 2006-11-30 ch 1,	abuseThis is a favorite, just can't get enough of it or any of your writing actually grins. Anywho, good stuff! Looking forward to reading more of your stuff! -Dooz
The-Kiss-of-Immortality 2006-07-31 ch 1,	abuseAw, that's really cute!! I like it a lot and I think that if you wanted, you could write a second or a third chapter. It could keep going but... that's up to you. I know I would read it. Thanks Shady
Gabrielle Lupin 2006-07-07 ch 1,	abuseI'm a huge fan of your work, and once again, I loved it. Very cute.
AzureAquarius 2006-06-30 ch 1,	abuseWhoa! Sa-wet! How very angsty! meh! i likesh it! I likesh it alot! WRITE MORE! DIDDY MAO! ^_^ Then I shall read and enjoy the next chapter anew! MUA HA!
jediserenity82 2006-03-28 ch 1,	abusebreathtaking as always ^_^
Queenofinsanity 2006-03-18 ch 1,	abuseaw! how swet!
Junyi the Shadow 2006-02-23 ch 1,	abuseThanks for another wonderful story with my favourites - LSF Revan and Carth. I hope more chapters will soon follow! Keep it up, good piece of writing, vividly describing the surroundings and the inner movements of Carth, I hope you'll carry that on. I'm anxious to read more! :)
Kipling Nori 2006-02-10 ch 1,	abuseThis is so pretty and sad. Poor Revan, seriously...what has she been up to these past few years? I love it, and I really hope you continue this. :)
Yumi's Jade Katana 2006-02-02 ch 1,	abusebeautiful
FaintlyAlarming 2006-01-28 ch 1,	abuseAw...
Child-of-the-Dawn 2006-01-28 ch 1,	abuseah, fluff..nice way to begin one's day ^_^
PhoenixFawkes310 2006-01-28 ch 1,	abuseWoo! What a start! Great character development so far! I'm looking fwd to reading more! -Emma
Arancionissimo 2006-01-28 ch 1,	abuseHi! I noticed just now, that I had, for some unknown reason, registered here in like a long time ago, in a galaxy far far away. Well now it came handy, because I wanted to comment this fic. Your friend informed me in DeviantART that you had written a fanfic inspired by my Revan's Return. Thank you. Thank you so much, this is really flattering and wonderfull! I adored the fic, it was very well written and my mind didn't rebel against the characterizations of neither Carth nor Revan at all. It was beautiful. Are you planning on continuing the story, or will you leave it as it is?

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