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| ibreak4CSI 2006-08-27 ch 1,  | abuseYeah, gotta love those drop in and go muses! :) Even though I am more of a HouseCuddy fan, I really enjoyed this. This was very well written angst, and it was the perfect length - not rushed or dragged out. Great job. |
| Dr. Rebecca Chase 2006-01-30 ch 1, | abuseaww, I liked this! It was short and sad but overall a nice story! |
| Catherine5 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely gorgeous. Simple, elegant and poignant. There's a fine line between showing House's softer side and making him all weepy, but you remained gracefully far away from that line and portrayed his pain beautifully. Definitely adding to my favourites, and my recs list as well. |
| KayleighBough 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, Brillant, with much inspiring of awe. My tears have been considerably jerked. =) |
| Chromo26 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abuseExcellent writing. I'm not a fan of Stacy and House, but credit must be given where it is due. Please write more! |
| J Daisy 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully done. What a brilliant short story. Ahh yes...the random flashes of inspiraton...I think the best stories come out of those things. I love how he had the imprint of her wedding ring in her hand. It was such a nice, personal touch. Ugh. Stories like this make me like She-Whose-Eyebrows-Know-No-Motion...(Stacey.) How can she NOT realize the damage she's doing?! And she just leaves Mark dangling on a string...*ends rant.* Either way, lovely lovely story. *Dashes off to profile to find more* |
| Review1234 2006-01-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseI might have to read this story more than once because I love it. On my favorites' list it shall go! Oh and hi. I'm not here to advertise, but I will tell you when the next chapter of "The Land of Qualms" will be up: Rough estimate - Right before Valentine's Day. But I'm not making any promises. Anyway, enough about my work; let me praise yours. Brilliant, absolutely brilliant. Don't you just love short bursts of inspiration? Mine usually turn into some rambling and incoherent drabble with a few hard-core simile or metaphors, but yours is beautiful. The sentences are laced with a certain aura of grace and everything melds together yet can be identified within the story. Ah, lovely, so lovely. Well, please keep writing, and thanks so much for the story. It pretty much made my day. :) |