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| Pandora of Ithilien 2006-11-03 ch 1, | abusei really liked this. good job. |
| Yero my hero 2006-03-15 ch 1, | abuseThe name is wonderful, and the flour is adorable and also heart-wrenching. This was perfect. :) |
| Port-of-Seas 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abuseI always did think Fae suited her as a name. There aren't enough Son of a Witch Bookverse books out there. Bravo. |
| blufair 2006-02-01 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is very good. Your characterization of Liir is excellent. The paragraph about how his name seems like a mistake particularly stands out to me as classic Liir. This fic almost feels like it could have been a scene from the book. It's short, but it has a fair amount of depth. I love the parallel between Liir's name possibly coming from Elphaba's unconscious babbling and Fae's name coming from her own gibberish. Son of a Witch fic is far too rare, so I'm really glad you've written some and done such a great job with it. |
| IamTheWitch 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abuseI loved this short piece! is it going to continue? Anyway, I loved your writing, and the words and descriptions were beautiful! Hope to read more from you! |
| Invisible-chan 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abuseThat's so cute! |
| Kennedy Leigh Morgan 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abuseI liked it! I loved how Liir got his daughter's name and her "gibberish" was cute. I also thought it was interesting that Candle is still at the mauntery but for now I like that too. I hope you continue with this I love it so far. |