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Aesara 2008-03-31 ch 3,	abuseAh, I love this story of yours. Everyone seems in character, and it follows the events of the game nicely. Dang. Haha, it looks like you won't be updating this soon, as your last chapter was written years ago...I don't regret having read thus far, however. Good stuff.
dragonbladeclock 2008-02-03 ch 1,	abuselol I was reading this and I was like, "2006!? O GOD THIS WILL NEVER BE FINISHED tear." I really like it. Like how you go through Ilyana's inner emotions. Plus, I love this pairing. FINISH IT
BioDragon 2006-08-06 ch 3,	abuseThis is cute and sad. Why don't they ever listhen to the voice in their heads! Why?! Nice story please update soon. :)
Lizai 2006-06-30 ch 3,	abuseAw, angst is no fun! :( Well it is, but it's not, y'know? Anyway, update soon! I really want to see what happens -- I mean, aside from the two of them getting together in the end.
Alyss 2006-06-30 ch 3, anon.	abuse=D OMG, I really like this story! I love it how you elaborate on Ilyana's inner conflicts. grins wickedly
Ari Phoenix 2006-05-18 ch 3,	abusePlz Plz Plz continue, i want to see what happens next, it's been so awesome so far. I like the style and the version. Mia has Blue hair, THough so you may want to look at her, and Illyana has the purple hair, but no tails, but when she goes to a sage she has a bun. well thats for in accuracy report for you, bye Ari Phoenix
Sir Exal 2006-05-04 ch 3,	abuseFirst...Hooray! Ilyana/Mia! I was hoping for this pairing to be out there! If there wasn't, I'D have to write one. The writing, especially Mia's thoughts and problems, is quite well-developed. The descriptions and other parts are fascinating and well-written. You're doing a fine job. And...there's the bad parts. Ilyanas's a tad OOC, (especially the ear-biting bit...stu-pid.) and her thoughts should have a bit more depth to them. But, anyway, keep going, I just adore Ilyana/Mia!
The Shadowfox Mistress 2006-04-19 ch 3,	abuseI need to know, please? I like this one alot.
shadowroiben 2006-03-29 ch 1,	abusegood story. in the 4th chapter, you should make llyana tell mia about her feelings. and aso add in stefan into the story somewere
Wolf from the Hidden Flames 2006-03-28 ch 3,	abuseHum. Short but goo.dthings have been going a little fast but I don't mind as much as some other peeps. I llove the conflict that has been going on with Mia and Illyana and maybe you could extend it to put some more drama in it. Though the angrish parts were a little weird coming from someone as solemn as Illyana, I liked it. All in all, short but good. Can't wait for your next chap and how Mia handles this situation. I wonder who their new partners are gonna be. Exciting! Really can't wait. Plus, I"m waiting to see Jill, which i hope you'll introduce her soon! And maybe a hint or two of Jill/Lethe? Can't wait and I hope you update soon!
shadowroiben 2006-03-28 ch 3,	abusei like the story. keep going with it
IceBlade28 2006-03-27 ch 3,	abuseNormally I'm not a fan of shojo-ai, but these are my two favourite characters, so . . . anyway, I have no idea what's going to happoen in Person's Unknown next- which I'm noticing a lack of reviews for! Get off your lazy butt and start reading!
JSB 2006-03-27 ch 3,	abuseAw...sad...but very good.
Toki Kishitani 2006-03-27 ch 3,	abuseXD Silly Chris. You'd better figure out what's going to happen soon though, cuz I like this a lot. ^^ Ily's one of my favorite characters (although she died in Chapter 9 on my third playthrough...>_>). Sorry I didn't review the last chapter. ^^; I had an essay to write and was reading this instead. ^_^; Not the best idea in the world. XD But yes... Poor Ily and Mia. =/ Update soon, or I shall pester you to no end until you do! ^-^ Okay maybe not to no end... >_> But... I'll still pester you! ^^' Okay... I'll just shut up now. =P
Me and Myself 2006-03-27 ch 3, anon.	abuse*** head* Hrmm...they seem a little out of character to me. Especially Ilyana. Aside from the perpetual hunger thing, she's missing that mask of pathetic woefulness covering her true, conniving nature- which was all the charm of Ilyana in the game. I have no problem with shoujo-ai, but keep in mind that it's not good to bend the characters' personalities just to try and squeeze them into a pairing like this (which is a bit far out- but meh, I guess that's what fanfiction is for in the first place). Of course, you manage to hide the fact that Ilyana and Mia are a sorta OOC under your writing skills, which are pretty good. So I'm guessing that nobody will be noticing this little nit-pick aside from me.

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