Awesome story. It's a fairly new (or fairly unused) concept. I like it, and hope to see more.

Keep it up!

Well, very original story. Particularly, it's interesting to see Genma as more than useless panda :)
I really hopr you'll finish it some day.

Future chapters... once ya get yer computer together, it'd be nice to see more. I'd be almost certain the organization just pushed what could be grounds for a blood feud with the Saotome and Tendo clans, and not just the Tendo dojo. May the muse be with ye.

I can't wait to see what happens next. I really like the Genma you created. It's very different!

Hope to see another update soon!

Hey, love this fic. And you're writing very well - didn't know you weren't a native English writer until I read your profile. Update soon please, I want to see Ranma beat the crap out of the people that tortured Hitomi.

Nice going!~ there's still room for improvement and I like the way this story flows. keep up the good work!~

I like this, and Ranma is showing a lot of Maturity, ANd i cant wait for Ranma to attack the Place where Hitomi was at

Damn... This is one of the best Ranma fan fictions that I have ever seen. It is only the second one where Ranma adopts a child, that I have seen I like these fic simply because of the nova factor. The nova factor being that if some hurts/threatens said child Ranma and co. will explode.

I'm happy to see you haven't discarded this fic!

Sorry for the delay in the review, been busy and all that... Now, on to the comments!

"Or mama decided to trick papa in asking her."... No need to read the header telling of the pairings: This screams "NABIKI" :-D

"100 yen or ice-cream." Bwahahahahahahahaha! So... Nabiki is already corrupting her not yet daughter?

Note that I liked the scene with Genma protecting Nodoka: It is exactly what I imagine Ranma would do in a similar case...

Please update soon!

WOW. This was a great chapter once again.

excellent

Yeah, rule number one about trying to kidnap a child from a family of martial artists... the grandparents know even more than their kids and won't hesitate to use their full arsenal of techniques to protect their grandchild. I can't wait to see how the fallout from this attempt goes. As for Emma, she's a nutcase and her whole group needs to go down in flames!

Hm why is it this group reminds me of Umbrella corporation. I'm surprised that the court keeps letting people who have attempted multiple kidnappings walk especially with witnesses who are willing to testify. Once maybe but after the 6th or 7th group shows up having attempted to kidnap the same child you'd think that they clue in to the fact.

Glad to see this continue! This is highly enjoyable!

Nice to see this is still active. I've always loved stories which force the characters into situations never covered in the original manga/anime... especially fun/funny/WAFFy situations. (basically, I prefer cheery plots with fresh ideas over dark plots with fresh ideas and, obviously, I prefer both over stale plots)