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agentcherub
2009-07-16 . chapter 4
this is brilliant. I love it. keep updating
Charlie's Angel 3890
2006-11-01 . chapter 4
"And in return, the approving smiles of five future FBI agents beamed back at him"

-very very cute-

i've had detention once...'cuz i was late to class. but i have plotted revenge many, many times.
Elysium1996
2006-07-20 . chapter 5
Good fun read. Will there be more? Should I add to my alert?
meganreeves
2006-07-13 . chapter 5
This is such a great story. I loved how Don was so serious in detention. The thought of Don wet is already distracting me. Keep going!
BeckyS
2006-04-30 . chapter 5
This is SO CUTE! Oh, you should see the huge grin on my face. Don -- a mentor to five delinquent-Federal agent wannabees -- and I wonder how he's going to get on with the new secretary, hm? Keep going! I'm waiting for more! Becky
JacobedRose
2006-04-30 . chapter 5
Miss Sloan seems to be very busy with all this signing. Please update soon!
JacobedRose
2006-04-23 . chapter 4
I absolutely LOVE this story. It is so funny and I love the idea of Don in high school! It was so evil to send him to detention, but I like seeing him interact with the boys and Rooney, I sure hope he continues to pull pranks on him, but he has to be very careful so that he's not caught. Please update very, very soon!
celadon
2006-03-06 . chapter 4
I'm sure it will be great, though the thought of Don all wet is distracting me already :) BTW, I don't know if you're writing your stories slightly in the future of the show, or haven't seen "Soft Target", but for the record, "Soft Target" places Don's current age on the show as 35, five years older than Charlie.
First Star of Night
2006-02-26 . chapter 3
I have to say, first of all, that you are putting a lot of detail into this, especially with all the pranks Don did in his years of high school. I can imagine Don doing all of these things with his friends. I almost laughed more at the thought of what Detention Don has become-a serious FBI agent. Though I'm not saying you're writing him out of character, as my brother did a similar thing when he got his job.
All in all, you are writing a wonderful story, and I look forward to another chapter with more laughs!
NidrianRuuthane
2006-02-25 . chapter 3
Uh-oh, i'm sure those kids learned something alright! Great fic, i laughed out loud! :)
First Star of Night
2006-02-23 . chapter 2
Oh WOW. That was hilarious to read. I loved how serious Don still has a sense of humor when it comes to dealing with old teachers. Please continue!
NidrianRuuthane
2006-02-20 . chapter 2
Great fic, well-written. I was snickering out loud as i read. I look forward to reading more!
simanis
2006-02-20 . chapter 2
whoop! whoop! way to go. very enjoyable piece. Do continue. thanks!
themidnightstar
2006-01-30 . chapter 1
Great start! This story has a clever concept and a lot of sharp, funny lines. I can’t wait to see where this goes.
pucktofaerie
2006-01-29 . chapter 1
hehe...This is great. I really hope there's gonna be more of this. Kudos on a unique idea! Can't wait for more. Keep up the great work and update soon.
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