omg! so much angst! i want, i want... damn, i don't know what i want! i mean, it's a beautiful oneshot, but it makes me so frustrated! in a good way?

i guess i wish i knew exactly what happened, and what'll happen if hisoka remembered and kept his mouth shut around hijiri. besides, if muraki decides to interfere, there'd be plot as well!

*Weeps* So sad. TT_TT I dont get what happened.

I love this! it feels like it wants a sequal. aka, i want to know what happened to tsuzuki. *whimper*

Love the flashbacks!

OMG! that made me cry! my poor 'soka and tsuzuki-chan! this was so well written! I loved it all! Do you think you could maybe make it into a story instead of just resigning it to a oneshot? I just loved it so much I wanna read more of it and find out what happens and I absolutly adore TsuHis ^^

That's so good!

Give me a minute; my mind will unreel and I'll have something critical to say.

I loved it. Leaving too many things unresolved can be irritating, and explaining too much takes the excitement out. You struck the right balance.

Ooh, damn this good. I'm liking the conspiracy theory going on here.

I think the scenes in italics work well. They somehow manage to both explain and confuse.

I'm so intrigued! Will Muraki be back? What happened to Tsuzuki? Great suspense.

Omg, so sad! It mad me want to cry... Great story though. I wish you would continue it and not leave it as a one-shot, but it is a terrific one. Kudos to you!

Oh, I likie this, I likie this muchly much!
Hisoka's suffering is so well done, everything about this is so well done, I really like it! You should do this from Tsuzuki's POV, or the others, that would be fun to read. Mwahahaha.

OMG!
I shouldn't have read this story!
What a tear-jerker!
Now, I really hate Hijiri... Tatsumi... Emma...
Oh, the deception!
Is this really a oneshot?!

This story was extremely well written! GREAT JOB!

hir's your review...

waha angsty XD i'm not usually a big fan of angsty stuff pero ok sya. =3

Oh! That's so sad! *sob*
I would love to see a more come out of this.

Keep writing *watery smile*

This makes me cry! So sad, but very good!

Wow. This is some seriously powerful stuff. I don't have any idea what exactly those two could have done to warrant Enma's complete and utter wrath, or what he's getting in return, but that really doesn't matter. Hisoka's suffering is so perfectly written. I feel completely trapped and disoriented and betrayed (by Hijiri no less?!) and doubting my sanity along with him, and the prose is a lot of what does that. Jeez, where does it all end? This is absolutely brilliant and I'm adding it to my faves.