perfect.

Sorry amazingly funny typo.

Landing in a crotch, Tim waited a second to see where his quarry was heading, before sprinting.


croutch. :D

This story wasn't any less enjoyable because it was made up of snippets which weren't continuous in time. In fact, I enjoyed reading it in this manner and I think for stories that show the training of a character, this might be the best way.

I have to say I enjoyed the physical lessons more than the mental ones, but not always. In fact, my most favourite scene was:

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As Tim made his way out of the Manor, Alfred’s voice stopped his exit.

“It took Masters Dick and Jason three weeks to be able to answer even half of those questions. I believe I am beginning to better understand why Master Bruce chose you and what he sees in you.”

The young man swallowed the lump in his throat. “Thank you Alfred that… that means a lot.”
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I fully agree with Tim when he says that it means a lot. It really does.

I'm adding this story to my favourites list. Thanks for sharing this with us.

Dear Susie, this is one of my all time favorite fics I downloaded it to my computer because I had no room left on my list. but upon a reread, I found an interesting quirk. I copied the text with my corresponding questions.

"It was in the middle of this panic attack, that Alfred came downstairs after receiving a call from Bruce."
So How did Bruce know? Where was he there that he witnessed the panic attack and why didn’t he help?

thanks, Jude

This is one of the most amazing serial stories I have ever read. It makes me wish they were real just to send them a link to your story!

very good story indeed

I really enjoyed this, especially since it showed how Tim's transformation by the end of each chapter. Very well done!

Overall, this story is something that I consider extraordinarily rare. This is clearly AU and has no relationship to how Tim became Robin in the comics. But it's still plausible. (Not to mention entertaining and well written.) Most authors, once they enter AU territory, can't wait to abandon everything about a character's personality they find even mildly inconvenient. You didn't do this. Tim still feels like Tim even though you can see him change and develop throughout the fic. Good job.

Sigh. A very satisfying ending, although I am sad to see it's over. Thanks for the great entertainment. Are you planning another story sometime soon? This one was well written and I'm sure anything else you do will be equally well done.

A great ending to a great story. Thank you.

This was very good. I liked it a great deal. You're the only one who has written something like this. I hope you plan to write something else in the future.

Nice epilogue.

It's been such a pleasure to read this collection! This last installment hasn't disappointed. I love the insight you have into Tim's character and feelings--it's true: he really does deserve to be Robin because he earned that right. And the warm fuzzy moments...aw!

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece of work! You are a very talented writer and I look forward to reading more of your work in this fandom in the future. Please, keep writing...and give me the pleasure of reviewing! :)

I love this story. I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed before, but I really am sad to see it done (becuase each month was so well written/thought out/amazing). Thank you so much for writing it - hopefully you'll write again in the future? I look foward to it.

I really love the way you've shown Tim's development and growth process! Re-reading the earlier sections of this piece and comparing it to his 'end stage' really does show how much progress he's made! Yay!