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| wolvera88 2008-09-29 ch 16,  | abuseInteresting story, you do miracles with words! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Tree 2008-09-14 ch 16, anon. | abuseawesome chappie! |
| blackdragonwingz 2008-08-14 ch 1, | abusesuch a great story! :D |
| Soniya Himoura 2008-07-14 ch 16, | abusethat was cool.. u haven't updateed in like forever.. yeah i'm really happy u updated...lol.. well i'll be patiently waiting for ur next installment. good chapter.. bye! |
| Mairz 2008-07-05 ch 16, | abuseWell this was a nice chapter. Very interested to see what Kenshin intends to do with all this new found information. I hope to see another chapter posted soon...this is one of the few stories I actually follow. |
| wheresmybook 2008-06-25 ch 14, | abuseThis is an amazing story- I really hope that you continue it. |
| nameless 2008-06-13 ch 16, anon. | abusewow...i LOVE this story! you HAVE to update it! its just too sweet and sad and so well written! xD |
| krazyANIMEchick 2008-06-09 ch 16, | abuseaww! poor kaoru! i like the story! Please update soon! :D |
| animefaves 2008-06-04 ch 16, | abuseplease update soon this is a really cool story and very well written! |
| Ivy Tearen 2008-06-04 ch 16, | abuseYOu are a wonderful writer. I can't wait to read what you are going to add next. If ot os ypur wish to be published some time I don't think you will have to much of a problem. I hopfully await the next installment. Thank you for publishing all of your stories on the web. |
| beautifullychaotic 2008-06-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseYAY!! an update!! iv always liked nightfall best out of all ur stories.. [the others r pretty good too :)] glad to see its still going.. thanks for the update, its really good.. really wanna see what kenshin will be upto after what he's seen.. hope u update again soon! |
| sakura-light-angel 2008-06-01 ch 16, | abuseI love your work... i am anxiuosly waiting for your next chapeter. Please keep it up! Great work as always!! |
| Dreaming One 2008-05-29 ch 16, | abuseThis fic is very dark but very good! I really like it. I got a bit frustrated in the middle because I felt that the disasters were a bit repetitious and it interfered with any potential rise-and-fall plot action. Its well written and mature, with consistent characterization, but could use some balance in terms of a) periods or moments of relative normalcy, and b) a bit more levity just to give the characters and readers a break. And you know, that only makes the horrible parts more horrible, when there is light to compare them to. That's my constructive criticism, lol. But honestly, I think this is great, and I'm totally excited to have found this fic. I LOVE Battousai fics. ^_^ Update Soon! ~May |
| evilteddybear 2008-05-29 ch 16, | abuseThank you so much for updating! I appreciate your time and effort, and skill! I have to admit I was a bit worried that your style would have changed and the story would be a bit mismatched from what you wrote before. I'm so glad you proved me wrong! Not that it would have really mattered. Well not much else to say. I'm hoping for a bit more K&K interaction in the future. Thank you again and again for your time and effort! Doumo Arigatou Gozaimasu! |
| Serphtears 2008-05-28 ch 16, | abusegreat update ^^ can't wait for more |