so nice to have you back...looking forward to the fireworks when she finally remembers what happened between her and kenshin.

Ah. Gotta love kids like Dove. They get to tell silly Kenshin that he actually gives a damn. .

And is this withdrawl episode ever going to end? Poor Kaoru...

I must find out what happens next, or I'll be tempted to make it up myself. Which would be bad. Really bad.

UPDATE!

I love some of your other stories so I thought I'd try this, and I'm so glad I did. Can't wait to see more!

As you warned this is a dark fic but I'm so into it. I can't wait to find out what will happen, how will he help her and help himself? Please update soon as I am holding my breath...Awesome story!

update soon plz! GREAT STORY!

As always, this chapter is fantastic! I love how you introduced Dove again, and I can't wait to see what all this stuff about the future is, it's bound to be fascinating! Update soon...pretty please with a cherry on top!

Woot

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LOVE IT! Please, update soon!

yay! you updated. xD i really enjoyed this chapter. good think kenshin wont let her die. hahaha.

i like how you tied dove into the story more.

anyway, i look forward to the next chapter. thank you!

-hotaru

Wow. Nice touch, bringing Dove back. You had me hanging on every word...and then nearly crying when I realized it was over. This was wonderful, though, and I can't wait for more! You're an amazing writer, and this is one of the most original stories I've come across in a long time. Well done!

Not being a writer myself I can't say I am aware of the many difficulties one faces when trying to convey things diffcult to put in words. But I think what you wrote turned out well...it seems that this chapter served as a transition point, where among other things, Kenshin's thoughts and feelings will be more open to the reader?

In any case, I have yet to come across anything you have written that could be considered even mediorcre. Your stories are unpredictable and characters wonderfully developed - which will always keep you on top of my favorites list.

As always looking forward to reading more -

reading your fics is like watching one of those films set in an asylum or a very complex mind-scape scene... haha... you write it well - that tittering between the edge of reality and the insanity thing... pain can indeed drive that kind of retreat...

i'm pretty excited as to the possibility of kaoru being able to get unhooked off wunder... is it even truly possible? what will be the consequences? and when will kenshin be revealed as a psychic...

sorry for the questions... haha... i'm just eager to see what you have in store... your plotlines always have a particular zing that has always appealed to me.

very tense in the beginning and i really was at the edge of my seat. sweet and mysterious at the end and again, I cant wait for the next chapter!

well done!

dee

So I am just sitting here, reading the story, scrolling down every few seconds, and suddenly- there's nowhere left to scroll. That's it. What the fuck? I have to admit, that was a good damn cliffhanger, if somewhat annoying. I wonder what she means by violet and black? Sometheing he'll like. And it isn't one thing, it is more than one because she said 'you'll like THEM'. What could she be talking about? I am rather glad that Dove is not completely gone-at the beginning of the story, I was sure she would play a failrly important part in the story, but then she died, and I was like 'guess not.' I forgot that she was a Seer. I'm glad that Kaoru's okay. Please write more soon. I imagine you must be busy- having to work on other stories as well as doing your regular everyday activities, but it is killing me not to know what's going on! Couldn't you give me a hint? Just send it to my email... Just a little hint about what Dobe was talking about. I am usually pretty good at figuring things out, but I'm not getting anything from those clues. They can't be knife colors- maybe if she was talking to Uno. Clothes? But that isn't important at all. Eyes? Babies? but where the fuck would you get a baby that color? lol While Kenshin's eyes are purple somethimes, niether his nor Kaoru's are ever black. That rules out that idea. Motorcycles? Cars? Ah dammit! I'll be thinking about it all day! It must be something new, something I don't know about yet. Oh, please LadyShiin, write more soon, and please if you could, just send me a LITTLE hint. You don't have to tell em what she speaks of, but just a little hint. A preview or something? Keep up the good work!

Kitty

YES! an update! been too long.. but this chap was good. Feel sorry for Kaoru.. but from Dove's words u kno things'll be alright :D.. lol 'violet and black' eh? ;) hope u update again soon!