|Reviews for Nightfall|
| Ivy Tearen 6/4/08 . chapter 16
YOu are a wonderful writer. I can't wait to read what you are going to add next. If ot os ypur wish to be published some time I don't think you will have to much of a problem. I hopfully await the next installment. Thank you for publishing all of your stories on the web.
| beautifullychaotic 6/4/08 . chapter 1
YAY! an update! iv always liked nightfall best out of all ur stories.. [the others r pretty good too :)] glad to see its still going.. thanks for the update, its really good.. really wanna see what kenshin will be upto after what he's seen.. hope u update again soon!
| sakura-light-angel 6/1/08 . chapter 16
I love your work... i am anxiuosly waiting for your next chapeter. Please keep it up! Great work as always!
| Dreaming One 5/29/08 . chapter 16
This fic is very dark but very good! I really like it. I got a bit frustrated in the middle because I felt that the disasters were a bit repetitious and it interfered with any potential rise-and-fall plot action. Its well written and mature, with consistent characterization, but could use some balance in terms of a) periods or moments of relative normalcy, and b) a bit more levity just to give the characters and readers a break. And you know, that only makes the horrible parts more horrible, when there is light to compare them to.
That's my constructive criticism, lol. But honestly, I think this is great, and I'm totally excited to have found this fic. I LOVE Battousai fics. _
| evilteddybear 5/29/08 . chapter 16
Thank you so much for updating! I appreciate your time and effort, and skill!
I have to admit I was a bit worried that your style would have changed and the story would be a bit mismatched from what you wrote before. I'm so glad you proved me wrong! Not that it would have really mattered.
Well not much else to say. I'm hoping for a bit more K&K interaction in the future. Thank you again and again for your time and effort! Doumo Arigatou Gozaimasu!
| Serphtears 5/28/08 . chapter 16
great update can't wait for more
| Paramecio 5/28/08 . chapter 16
this is the most beautiful story that I ever read
It is super I love it
This is so addictive... i hope that you could update soon I cannot wait
| methyl42 5/28/08 . chapter 16
nice to see this story continuing. I remember enjoying it before and I enjoyed this chapter. I hope you continue
| RubieRedSlippers 5/26/08 . chapter 16
I'm so thrilled that you updated! I went back to read the previous chapter just so that I could truly appreciate this new updated one properly. I really love the direction the story is going in-along with the development of Kenshin and Kaoru's relationship. It seems as though this story has a long way to go, and I'm pretty psyched. I was afraid you weren't going to continue all of your stories, so this update has renewed my faith. Can't wait to read more of your work! You really are a fabulous writer.
| DeeKaui 5/26/08 . chapter 16
nice to read this fic - i haven't read in a while, but i feel like i can read it over again from the beginning - its really well written and thanks for this chapter. it was a change of pace and i really did enjoy it. great work!
| BumblingLobster 5/26/08 . chapter 16
Yay! you finally updated! i was getting sad because i thought you had stopped writting this story, but it sems like i was wrong! poor kaoru, she has such a depressing life. I hope she gets a happy ending!
thank you for updating!
| mafuyu hotaru 5/26/08 . chapter 16
Hm very good. I enjoyed it. I wish there had been a bit more of the present in the chapter but that's okay. I look forward to the next one! Thanks for updating.
| Kura-sama 5/26/08 . chapter 16
Yay updates Been a while. So happy to read more
I wonder what exactly happened there? Did Kaoru's fragile shields failed to keep Kenshin out and somehow projected her memories to Kenshin ... or maybe, Kenshin have some sort of psychic abilities himself? Hmm. I don't think Kenshin is as normal as he wants to believe ... he definitely got something going on. I wonder if he is also a Telepath of sorts ... he's going to freak if he finds out he is indeed a Psychic
Great chapter Now we know more about Kaoru... and Kenshin is starting to care more and more about her Kehehe
Love the story, hope to read more soon
| Fenris Jin 5/26/08 . chapter 16
Hmm.. looks like Kenshin's getting more of Kaoru's past..
Guess it'll get them together much faster than the sympathy/ragdoll angle.. seeing as Kaoru can't really keep up with Himura..
| serabi 5/26/08 . chapter 16
Yey! An update! It's been long since you last updated. Anyhow, nice chapter. Kenshin's getting to know Kaoru through her dreams. He's going to be surely protective of her (more protective) then before.
Hope to read another chapter from you soon :)