I like it keep it up.

my oh my...

That game, 'Domination' is right out of James Bond, 'Never Say Never Again'. I like how you used it, along with the fake bomb thing. This is a great story

Simba out

I am SO glad there will be a sequel! Thanks SO much!

~Jessica

Your WHOLE story is A+ material!

NO! Oh no! That was SO sad! I hope I see something good in the next chapter! Now THIS is MY favorite chapter!

~Jessica

Nice ending of the chapter. Lol. It made me laugh. A+. This is my new favorite chapter!

~Jessica

Oh, suspenseful! Keep ot up! A+ material!

~Jessica

Awesome again! But I also saw that your grammer has some mistakes.

~Jessica

Yay! The Cooper gang reunites! I can't wait!

~Jessica

Great! This is my favorite chapter so far! Keep up the good work!

~Jessica

You're still doing AWESOME! More suspense! A+!

~Jessica

Awesome again! You ended the chapter with something exciting that makes people want to keep reading! That's really good!

~Jessica

Awesome! Good plot! I can tell that something is about to happen!

~Jessica

I enjoyed it!

sequel please
Thank you