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| cherry-kiss-red 2006-01-30 ch 1, | abuseGreat. I can't stop smiling. I really love this one. |
| Amaya92 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abuseVery good! Could use some work with grammar, but I say that to everyone :) |
| jtbwriter 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute-what a great way to spring a surprise party and show how Gris loves Sara! Good fic-thanks! |
| MC New York 2006-01-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was madd sweet... I loved it! I simply loved it. I just wish you would've written a reaction to everyone after Griss and Sara kissed. Though we all pretty much know what it would consist of... :-)... I love it. Keep writing such damn good stories! Peace out, one love, MC New York |
| xyber116 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abuseUsually I don't leave bad reviews unless they completely stumble through their English. But for some reason this felt really corny. Maybe next time don't make the ending so sappy. |
| cowgirl.at.heart 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abuse*tear* that was so sweet! maybe something like that will really happen. hey i can hope can't i? lol i'll keep my fingers crossed |