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Reviews For: Her Happiest Birthday Yet

cherry-kiss-red
2006-01-30
ch 1,
abuseGreat. I can't stop smiling. I really love this one.
Amaya92
2006-01-29
ch 1,
abuseVery good! Could use some work with grammar, but I say that to everyone :)
jtbwriter
2006-01-28
ch 1,
abuseThat was cute-what a great way to spring a surprise
party and show how Gris loves Sara!

Good fic-thanks!
MC New York
2006-01-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was madd sweet... I loved it! I simply loved it. I just wish you would've written a reaction to everyone after Griss and Sara kissed. Though we all pretty much know what it would consist of... :-)... I love it. Keep writing such damn good stories!

Peace out, one love,
MC New York
xyber116
2006-01-28
ch 1,
abuseUsually I don't leave bad reviews unless they completely stumble through their English. But for some reason this felt really corny. Maybe next time don't make the ending so sappy.
cowgirl.at.heart
2006-01-28
ch 1,
abuse*tear* that was so sweet! maybe something like that will really happen. hey i can hope can't i? lol i'll keep my fingers crossed
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