Hydro: Oh no DK wid a bazooka! AAHH!
Link: I'm FRE!!
Shadow: Only cuz you're needed in later chapters.
Hydro: Besides if you were dead then I couldn't glomp you anymore!
Link: Y_Y Somebody just shoot me.
Hydro:Anyways funny chappie. Update soon and I'll give you another cookie! And I promise I won't kill Link. lol. ^_^

Hydro: Hehehe this is funneh! C.Falcon is stupid. He must DIE! Muahahahahahaha! -choke- erm...
Shadow: Umm...
Hydro: Just so ya know, Link rox me sox! *glomps Link*
Link: Let go! Help!
Shadow: *ignores them* Anyways, This chappie is funny. Update soon! *gives you a cookie*
Link: Can't...breathe...*turns blue* x_x
Hydro: ^_^

That was weird. Although there were some funny parts like the Chicken Little part. But seriously that was confusing where did that giant ball come from. Well yeah so anyway overall it was okay.

Heh, it was good! Don't be like that towards yourself, you do great in humor!
I'll be looking out for more of you. DON'T YOU DARE LEAVING THIS FIC... uh, yeah. Bye!

With randomness humour, you only hit gold with a joke every now and then, so use some like, irony, satire or wit or something. Except for a few times where I laughed, I found most of the random stuff in there was just too absurd and nonsensical to be funny. There has to be some context for randomness, you can't just list random stuff and hope for the best (there were some good parts, though.

I can only name a few authors that are successful that use randomness all of the time, and they use other type of jokes as well.

Script format also spoils some of the jokes. I don't particularly like it, and unless executed well, find people that use script format lazy. However, yours was pretty neat, but try and stay away from it. Please write in proper paragraphs.

Overall, it was okay. If you want to be a successful writer, then try and write in proper sentences, but if you think all of this is a bit of fun, that's okay.

Young link's show is really...(cough)(crappy) And if ya can please review my story.Oh yeah got your PM.

(Emperor's voice)Good,good,good!If you get a chance review some stories if you wanna.did your first fic get any reviews?mine didn't...

Ok, not to sound mean, but someone's gotta do it. I really didn't understand it at all...

I just have a suggestion, Don't write in Script format!

My story was deleted for that and now I havae to start it all over again...and it was 16 chapters in!

Also giving a little detail would help too.