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DreamerChick
2008-08-03
ch 1,
abuse::shivers::

That was...wow...i...am speechless. That was amazingly written. ::shivers again:: Beautifully done.
Mrs. James Norrington
2008-07-16
ch 1,
abuseThat... is beautifully, hauntingly written. I love the darkness of it!
CurlySweet
2008-01-12
ch 1,
abuseWow. This is just so...bitter and sad and grim. It's PERFECT!

So realistic and poignant how all his friends disappeared, resulting in his having to turn to Alexi. I love the lust/hate aspect to their relationship. This is the first (and probably the only) Alexi/Mark fic I've ever read and it is exceptional. Dude. I kind of love you right now.
Random Projects
2006-11-24
ch 1,
abuseIt's dark and kinda ironic... love it. Everyone left in such a natural way... like water flowing. And poor poor Mark, alone and jaded...

Couldn't spot any mistakes, so good job!
Inglesa
2006-10-10
ch 1, anon.
abusewoah, that was...wierd
so cool, yet soo sad but i really like it!
keep writing!
aspirer
2006-09-26
ch 1,
abuseyes. yes. yes. perfect. this sounds morbid, but all the different ways that the rest of them disappeared from marks life makes perfect sense. a real heartbreaker.
HughloverX
2006-09-02
ch 1,
abuse*blink* Wow. Just...wow. It's so honest and so...wow! Great job. Poor everybody, though I could see it as a depressing and logical ending. Fantabulous job.
Anon
2006-02-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseThere was not one word of this that I didn't love. Absolutley amazing...I cant wait to read more of your work!
Cthulhu On Rye
2006-01-29
ch 1,
abuseAbsolutely stunning, this was just a breath-taking little piece.
Brokenheartblu
2006-01-29
ch 1,
abuseOh wow. That was hauntingly beautiful. Wow. It's so tragic, what becomes of everyone, but the way you wrote it was just so gorgeous. I loved it! So very much. You did an awesomely awesome job.
prying.delilah.
2006-01-29
ch 1,
abuseOh gosh. That was hauntingly beautiful. I'm speechless. Do you have more? I'm going to go look for more...
Elizabeth Theresa
2006-01-28
ch 1,
abuseNice job! I'm really impressed with the way this was written, very unique.
burn to emerge
2006-01-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseI wish I could find the words to describe how amazing this story is, but I can't. So I'll just stick with 'beautiful'. :)
Galinda05
2006-01-28
ch 1,
abuseReally frightening and wonderfully written. It's hard to believe that Mark would ever give up filmmaking, but after everything that happened, I can totally see it.
cameragirl
2006-01-28
ch 1,
abusei hate you for writing that amazing story
i should hate you
but it was so great and heartwrenching
great job
::sobs::
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