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| DreamerChick 2008-08-03 ch 1, | abuse::shivers:: That was...wow...i...am speechless. That was amazingly written. ::shivers again:: Beautifully done. |
| Mrs. James Norrington 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abuseThat... is beautifully, hauntingly written. I love the darkness of it! |
| CurlySweet 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is just so...bitter and sad and grim. It's PERFECT! So realistic and poignant how all his friends disappeared, resulting in his having to turn to Alexi. I love the lust/hate aspect to their relationship. This is the first (and probably the only) Alexi/Mark fic I've ever read and it is exceptional. Dude. I kind of love you right now. |
| Random Projects 2006-11-24 ch 1, | abuseIt's dark and kinda ironic... love it. Everyone left in such a natural way... like water flowing. And poor poor Mark, alone and jaded... Couldn't spot any mistakes, so good job! |
| Inglesa 2006-10-10 ch 1, anon. | abusewoah, that was...wierd so cool, yet soo sad but i really like it! keep writing! |
| aspirer 2006-09-26 ch 1, | abuseyes. yes. yes. perfect. this sounds morbid, but all the different ways that the rest of them disappeared from marks life makes perfect sense. a real heartbreaker. |
| HughloverX 2006-09-02 ch 1, | abuse*blink* Wow. Just...wow. It's so honest and so...wow! Great job. Poor everybody, though I could see it as a depressing and logical ending. Fantabulous job. |
| Anon 2006-02-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseThere was not one word of this that I didn't love. Absolutley amazing...I cant wait to read more of your work! |
| Cthulhu On Rye 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely stunning, this was just a breath-taking little piece. |
| Brokenheartblu 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abuseOh wow. That was hauntingly beautiful. Wow. It's so tragic, what becomes of everyone, but the way you wrote it was just so gorgeous. I loved it! So very much. You did an awesomely awesome job. |
| prying.delilah. 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abuseOh gosh. That was hauntingly beautiful. I'm speechless. Do you have more? I'm going to go look for more... |
| Elizabeth Theresa 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abuseNice job! I'm really impressed with the way this was written, very unique. |
| burn to emerge 2006-01-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseI wish I could find the words to describe how amazing this story is, but I can't. So I'll just stick with 'beautiful'. :) |
| Galinda05 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abuseReally frightening and wonderfully written. It's hard to believe that Mark would ever give up filmmaking, but after everything that happened, I can totally see it. |
| cameragirl 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abusei hate you for writing that amazing story i should hate you but it was so great and heartwrenching great job ::sobs:: |