What the hell!? Celena's pregnant!?

Your last lines are always so catchy. Great ending to a great story! I have got to read the epilogue now.

"Then came the heat Hitomi had been waiting for, and she melted." This is such a beautiful line. I totally loved the part when Van was talking to himself. It made him seem more human who has flaws instead of someone who's always so strong.

This is definitely one of the best chapters yet. The revelations shocked the hell out of me and I'm really wondering who the Sun God is...Is it Chid? I mean he's kinda like the only kid in Escaflowne...

The symbolisms you used for this chapter is amazing. Dryden really amuses me!

I'm really wondering whether Allen and Marlene will end up together. Damn, Allen is a huge cradle robber.

I knew it! Folken's the counselor and the way you described the vocalist of the electronic band fit Folken perfectly! Anyways, his character is really interesting!

Honestly, Marlene freaks me out.

The guidance counselor seems really mysterious. I also love the part when you mentioned that the kids inside the detention room were looking at Hitomi like she was their god. That totally cracked me up!

I'm glad that I have finally gotten the time to read this second book of your story. It's really good and I don't know why but those blue roses are sweet! I love how the wedding was so unconventional and how you described Van's appearance.

Oh, and the epic story between Allen and Marlene starts...

I really liked the conversation between Hitomi and Allen. They never had the chance to speak properly to each other.
Mostly cause Van wouldn't allow him to be alone with Hitomi; that's at least how I saw things.

I was So confused with this chapter at first. That cleared out when I read the next ones where you explained Folken's ability though.
It was generally stupid of Hitomi to go in aunt Flo's house. She probably wouldn't tell Hitomi where Van was even if she knew.

I didn't read so carefully this chapter the first time but I did this time and I like it.
I'm guessing Marlene doesn't like being in her sister's shadow.
Dryden's character in this story is extremely amusing, he isn't much different from the original character when it comes to women. Although despite everything he isn't as half as bad as Allen.

I probably wouldn't be as patient with my dad as Hitomi was. I would snap at him no matter who he was to me. Van had no idea he had send her from bad to worse.