Beautifully written. Very poetic.

Gen

WOW, that was amazing.

this is fantastic! I love stories like this, this one is by far my favorite meeting of sg1! excellent job

this a very unique way of retelling SG-1’s life story without giving away too many spoilers. That’s perfect:) and it also subtly addresses the fact that Jack is about 10 yrs or so older than carter, but ‘fate steps in.’ I love how fate is never finished, really nicely written:)

tehe well done, I enjoyed it

This one was great Maggie... how did I miss it?

So the last line is ... fate isnt done with him yet... so this one if just begging for another chapter. After all you have had 10 yrs to draw from.

Impress me!!

beautiful

cant think of anything else, except that
chlo

I liked this. You have a good writing style, and I love the last line.

[But fate wasn't finished with him. Not yet.]

Great job. ^^

excellent ficlet. i love all the near encounters throughout their lives

:) Very nice on shot piece. Reads like a tribute to fans, in a way.

Whoa. It gave me shivers just reading it. Definitely good. I love your use of a variety of vocab. Thumbs-up all around!

That was really wonderful Maggie.

Beautifully depicted.

Great job!

I really liked this. It was really sweet.

brilliant... simply brilliant.

WOW...I love it.