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Reviews for: Thorns in Mossflower-part 1
The Littlest Dibbun 9/3/05 . chapter 1
This has a good plot, but you are taking things in a big rush. Slow down with the story a little next time. Spend more time on the characters.

The Littlest Dibbun
Darks Light 4/10/04 . chapter 1
one word: kool...
AnvilBlue 5/18/03 . chapter 1
Kewl Villian
Ouch 5/22/00 . chapter 1
Cool... Intense. Love the villain.
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