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Maran Zelde
2009-04-08 . chapter 27
Although I'm disappointed that you didn't continue this, I get where you're coming from. I've discontinued a few fanfics too. If I ever attempt to write another multi-chaptered fanfic, I won't post the first chapter until the last chapter is finished.

"most of the informational IZ sites have closed down"

Yeah, what's up with that? I miss thescarymonkeyshow(dot)com. That site was awesome!

Anywho. I like the idea of the scientists cloning Det in Area 51. I don't like the Bitters mind-wipe ending, though. Not just because I'm a sucker for happy endings, but also because the whole point of a story is for the main character to grow and change. So if you put Ms. Bitters mentally back where she started, what's the point? Eh, but I realize it's a moot point since you're not continuing the fanfic anyway.
passionateartist
2009-03-24 . chapter 27
Wow, you had it all planned out and it seemed very elaborant. I keep getting more and more excited as I read what was to happen next in the story! Thank you so much for writing this eplioge thing, or whatever it is. I'm glad I get to know how it ends. The ending was horrible but I enjoyed every bit of reading your outlines and notes. And of course I love Det more than ever now!

Thanks again!

Beans
ListensToGreenDay
2009-03-23 . chapter 27
The only thing I can really say is:
DX DX DX DX
TallestBlue
2009-03-23 . chapter 27
AW THAT WOULD HAVE BEEN A FREAKING AWESOME STORY! I hope you do write it from scrath soon.
Frosty
2008-11-11 . chapter 11
Great Story :)

Wish you'd update though...
ListensToGreenDay
2008-09-21 . chapter 26
Holy... TT_TT YOU MUST FINISH! PLEASE! PLEASE! *cling* PLEASE!
ListensToGreenDay
2008-09-21 . chapter 15
Mwahaha. Luff this story! YOU NEED TO FINISH IT! THINK OF SOME WAY TO FINISH IT! T_T
TallestBlue
2008-08-31 . chapter 26
NO! PLease PLEASE update PLEASE!
Professor J.L.nemo
2008-06-09 . chapter 26
AB-SU-LUT-LY STUNNING!
I don't even WATCH invader Zim, But this...THIS makes me whish I did!
Briliant job!
PLEASE upload the next chapter before I gnaw of my fingernails!
passionateartist
2008-03-29 . chapter 26
I've never been so heartbroken to see a story discontinued. I truly didn't know that it hadn't been updated in years when I started reading and now I feel like crying. This story has touched me deeply and I really love it. This needs to go on. It needs to continue.

Beans
Nikooru-chan
2008-03-08 . chapter 26
Its a shame you seem to have given up on the story, because it was such a wonderful, original piece of work. If you do deside to continue, I urge you to with all my heart. Its an amazing story, and I thoroughly enjoyed it !
GuesssWho
2007-11-13 . chapter 26
I think Ms. Bitters is an alien, you know. Or maybe a demon . . .

But whatever happened to this?
GuesssWho
2007-11-13 . chapter 12
This is cool!
But remember, dreams lead to hideous implosions!
Reginleifthevalkyrie
2007-09-21 . chapter 26
ILU, this must be better best story ever. It's better than all three on the proper novels i'm reading right now.
HeCallsMeHisChild
2007-07-01 . chapter 26
Please please please update!
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