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| Lacie Montez 2008-05-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseI LOVE THIS STORY! :.D |
| SharinganWarriorTribute 2007-05-14 ch 1, | abuseSweet!your stories always make good reads! |
| Caroliina 2007-05-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseei muuten kun että ootko suomalainen ? are you Finnish yourself ? |
| EmberFalcon 2007-03-05 ch 1, | abuseROTFLMAO! Oh my god, that was funny! I thought it was really cool and original for that matter (originallity is so very rare nowadays) well done! -faves- |
| Lil' Miss.Rebel 2006-11-15 ch 1, | abuseso cool! |
| Tiuhtiina 2006-06-26 ch 1, | abuseHeya! I liked it! :D Haha, didn't except me to review, right? *Grin* Well I did! |
| The One True Koneko 2006-06-23 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome! They should make a movie, you know? It'd be pretty cool. |
| lightheart 2006-06-04 ch 1, anon. | abusethis rocked! but the thing is why you didn't make it longer. i mean you could taken this so much farther, and you could have a least given us more on the fact that carm got hooked up with sly. now i'm just saying that it would have been even better if ya took it a little bit further. but as i said before this was just plain awsome! |
| NaoliolaStarFly 2006-05-30 ch 1, | abusejust like the esquisite chritmas story this was just what i wanted to read. |
| Saffron Panther 2006-05-30 ch 1, | abuseYet another brilliant piece of yours that I have had the pleasure of reading. This is good stuff here, Heiduska, and I am surprised at myself for not reading this sooner. This is one of the best OneShots I have read yet. |
| Raco Cooper 2006-05-04 ch 1, | abuseGreat Idea. I like it a lot. |
| Vanguard Ziggy 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseAnother good one. I'll be on line to submit my stories later this next weekend. Not this coming saturday, sunday but the one before it. |
| MissMary 2006-03-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseExecellent idea, quite a fun story! I enjoy Sly and Carmelita too, especially the side remarks... |
| renegade-demoness 2006-03-05 ch 1, | abusei loved it! |
| jdog16 2006-03-04 ch 1, | abusePretty good idea, kind of a shaky execution. There were a few grammatical errors, and too few details. Work on those, and it'll be great. |