Reviews for Behind Closed Doors

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NemesisZero 2008-04-24 ch 3,	abuseNice little fic you've got here. Too many unresolved issues at the end for my taste, though... it's halfheartedly disappointing in the same way that episodes 25-26 were. Feel free to make a continuation that leaves me even more confused than I am now. :D
This is my name 2008-03-24 ch 3,	abusegreat story.
rcswart 2008-02-23 ch 3,	abuseA real tear jerker.
Wildcard-JT 2007-04-20 ch 3,	abuseI was looking over all your stories and I realized that I never reviewed this one... I think "heart-wrenching" is the only term I could use to discribe the emotions running through this fic. Far surpassing angst and fluff this stands as an example on how to compose a well written, emotionally engaging, fan fiction in the Eva cannon. I can only hope that you'll blow the dust off of this one and update sometime soon.
GrizzlyBiscuit 2006-10-18 ch 3,	abusein all honesty, I don't think anything else needs to be added to this piece of literature. Yes, Shinji is still a broken person on the inside, and no one really knows what exactly happened out there at the forest where assumedly the blue reading came from at exactly the same time that Shinji touched the liquid, but who can be catagorized as being a whole and sane person? People have to learn to move on with what they can do and what they can't do. Shinji has been stuck in his place of mourning that he couldn't move beyond the grief, which was detailed excellently. The recurrence of Asuka walking in on another person she cared for trying to or already having taken their life gave her the chance to realize what was in front of her and force her to accept that she also had to make a move. It would be interesting to see how Shinji would try to recover and become a person beyond who he is now, but in all honesty, anything associated with his past after his recovery would most likely cause a recurrence of this suicidal act and may drive him into a more desperate violent ending. In all probability, it would be one that even Section 2 could not stop him if he, say for instance, inexplicably threw himself into the path of an oncoming car just as it was passing him? Living is rough, any person who has lived beyond their time knows this all too well. Not trying to live is beyond sad, and now Shinji can have the chance to begin to live again. Any person is their own angel or demon in the literal sense, hell is but a step away if we could but toss aside humanity and devour insanity.
Generally Depressing 2006-10-02 ch 3,	abuseI really liked this story. The writting sort of made me start hating Asuka a little bit, but it was all worth it. A great ending, and it was told incredibly well. I really hope that you do continue this, there are still questions that need to be answered liket the angel, and what is going to happen next.
Hidari 2006-07-31 ch 3,	abuseBrilliant fic! I can really imagine it, nothing less than a death WOULD get Asuka to admit her feelings for him. BTW, bile is green and not particularly foul smelling. Just thought you might like to know. ^_^
Hidari 2006-07-31 ch 2,	abuseo_O Speechless. Makes my heart bleed! Great chapter!
Hidari 2006-07-31 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful. Painful. Very well written. You have a very good grasp of what makes Shinji and Asuka tick.
Necrokon 2006-07-29 ch 3,	abuseI love your story. I hope you don't leave that last chapter as the ending. I want to know what happens afterwards. Keep writing.
SephirothVII 2006-07-17 ch 3,	abusePlease, continue this story!
Dar Sel'La 2006-05-31 ch 3,	abuseI would have to say that I would love to read more of this one, because there is so much more to explore with thier relationship, as well as what could be Rei, or something similar, showing up in the forest. You do also have a good point that this is a great place to end it at. The setup was about what I had expected, but the ending was a surprise to me. Looking forward to reading more of your works.
Shogunate 2006-05-27 ch 3,	abuseAwesome. Awesome. End kinda disappoints, but whatever. Awesome fic. (made my day)
OUBWIUBGPPPINSOJNONOICNFSOI... 2006-03-25 ch 3,	abuseBrilliant, simply speaking. The imagery was great, and everything else just- clicked. This has to be on par with some of the real novels I've read by professional (and famous) authors. You have supreme talent, and you deserve way more than writing fanfiction. Have you tried writing a novel of your own? I'm sure you could, easily. This story may be at an end, but I hope that I get to see more like this even better than this was. I know it's in you. Cheerio, Naon
loaned 2006-03-23 ch 3,	abuseME LIKES! IT was quite good and the way you twirled around there minds like ballerina takes quite the demented skill.^,^. Later!^O^

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