WOW Harry..using an icepick, how very Sicilian of you !!
IC this story hasn't been undated in about three years..is it abandoned??
I'll add it to my story favs & alerts.

:)

love that harry isnt just sitting on the sidelines and obeying dumbles every word and that he has someone supporting him and not nagging him to death, getting jealous, or going all fan girl on him. this is one of the "smartest" hp fics ive read! kudos:)

susan is now my favorite chick character!

nice, shame you ended this so long ago...o well, guess thats the way it goes sometimes.

Cool and I hope there is more. Thanks for writing.

great

Interesting

Again read this partial story. Any chance of finishing this. This has got to be the best Harry/Susan story out there except that its unfinished.

I read this story awhile back and returned to reread it and I still say it is the best example of a real Harry Potter. You have taken a character that is time and time again written as a suffering martyr and given him a rebillious, angry, betrayed persona that he is entitled to. You have made Harry and your storyline more realistic than any I have read to date. BRAVO! My only hope is this long dormant story and its author somehow rekindle their creativity and return so I and many others can read more. ED

Excellent! Hm, so she can picture her self falling in love with him? Interesting choice of words. I wonder how the people will respond to him killing Pettigrew.

Awesome Chapter! Very funny by the way. What exactly is the "incident with the Polyjuice Potion and the drunken"? I love how this is a serious story, but you keep slipping in hilarious comments. I am REALLY enjoying this story, and can hardly wait for the next chapter.

Now things are heating up. Nice magazine, like how she said she wanted to read that. VERY spicy!:) Can't wait for the next chapter, and I liked how you described the pictures, very creative:)

Next chapter should be very interesting, CAN'T WAIT!

Hi. I LOVE this pairing. It isn't very common, and I find it very refreshing. I am a huge Harry Potter fan, Believe me when I say I am not exagerating, I have read each book at least 20 times. (I read every morning and night and loved to re-read the series.) I have read many Harry Potter fan fiction, and can say in complete honesty that your story is unique and original, and I eagerly await the next chapter.

Great start! I look forward to more.