It wasen't that bad if you really think so blame it on lack of sleep.My friend gave me this name.I think she is really cool.ok.uhh..bye

nice! please continue!

I like Dido's music. She's kewl and so is your song fic. you went perfectly with the words of the song.

Hey this is great! i did this same song for In A Heartbeat! It works good with your story

A nice little vignette. Evocative.

that was the best stupid song/vid/whateverfic i ever read, come to think of it it's the only stupid song/vid/whateverfic i ever read. just kidding very cool fic

coolieos..

who ever write dat should dont cuss cause lil kids cime in here read it and stared sayin it soo.

Cute! Keep it up.