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| caz1969 2008-08-17 ch 1,  | abuseFantastic, loved it from start to finish |
| JellybeanChiChi 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseFourth time reading this. Still makes me laugh. Jess is my hero. But I have to ask, is she originally from Boston/Northeast? Since she described the storm as a "wicked storm." Just caught that this read around. Made me laugh. Thanks for the great story. |
| WhiteWingeDove 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was a great story. Very interesting that it was from a POV of a charcter you created. Jess was funny and smart and sassy. Perfect for your story. And it was also very interesting how you had Grissom behaving behind the scenes. I never pictured him as the type to get drunk around others. I figured if he'd get smashed, it would probably be at his townhouse or somewhere more private. So that was also very original. A very good switch from most fanfics. Well done! |
| jenstog 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abuseThis story so owns! I can only dream to be as imaginative as this. I swear I can visualize everything about Jess and the diner. Thank you for writing & sharing :) |
| Quill-32 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseA wonderfully fresh look at the GSR, very humorous and touching. Jess is quite a real character, and it's great to perceive the geeks through her eyes, to be frustrated and amused along with her. Lovely! |
| sam 2007-10-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat an amazing story. I love the outside perspective and most of all, the great voice that you have going. Love it, love it, love it. Thank you so much for writing this great story! |
| patella 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abuseloved it from every angle awesome job |
| toothchick 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! Creative POV! As I was reading, I was trying to figure out in the CSI timeline where the story was. (the loud diners after his surgery for his hearing...) No fair throwing in the bipass surgery-- I found this story because anthor author listed it as a favorite...now I will check out the rest of your work. Thanks for the fics. |
| MC New York 2007-10-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseBy any chance, have you ever met my Aunt Jenny? Because your character Jess is pretty much my aunt in a nutshell! Except, more city woman attitude. Not country. :) This story was impressive. Beyond impressive actually. I can't describe. Your character had a voice of her own and I love how you incorporated her. Perhaps my favorite line/lines in this? [“I set her straight. I told her about our torrid love affair and our secret love child. I even offered to introduce her to Charlie, but she seemed really upset about that. She kind of drove off in a huff.”] [I got defensive. “You’d better start talking or I’ll have to tell Sara where you are the next time she comes looking for you in my diner.”] [A blonde with big boobs and a lifetime investment in Botox shot me a weird look right before I was shuffled into Conrad’s office.] - Well gee... Wonder who THAT could be. [I rumpled up my hair a bit and I tried to think of the most depressing thing in my life at that moment. My credit card bill payments came to mind, and I was in character by the time I reached the receptionist’s desk.] [I thought about when my cat died, when my mom died, and how I’d never, ever have enough money to buy a Lambourghini.] - I know how she felt on that last one. I had a LOT of favorite lines, to be truthful. I loved this story, there's no other way around it. I want to marry it. Can I have the right to marry a story? Please? Masterpiece right here. I'll tell you that much. I may throw some stories into my favorite pile on a limb, but this deserves to go in with HONORS. H.O.N.O.R.S. :) Peace out, one love, MC New York |
| Mindy 2007-08-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! That was really something special! Awsome! Thanks MM |
| JaysEmm 2007-08-01 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant, just brilliant. |
| LeslieSidle 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseThis has to be one of my favorite fanfic ever. It's so sweet and I love how it is written. |
| VictorianaWillows 2007-06-28 ch 1, | abuseThat was incredible! I loved it! |
| chirachi 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abuseWow... I'm impressed! I really like the way you built up this story, like a complete stranger! I really like it, honestly. Keep on writing! x chirachi, A GSR writer. |
| contrarymotion 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abuseI loved this story!! Where did you get the idea for this point of view? It's very creative. Definately not your average run-of-the-mill plot. Great job! Happy writing! |