|Reviews for Sparkling Stars|
| sky75 7/20/09 . chapter 1
I really liked your story and your subject - Cringer was always my favorite. :) The only suggestion I have - you have this in the beginning:
"I feel a gentle breeze whip around me"
Whipping seems to imply a more forceful wind which is kind of at odds with a gentle breeze. But other than that the story is great!
| mystlady 2/7/06 . chapter 1
nice one shot, Ashley. LOL. You should do Madame Razz (I think that's her name).