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stunninglyaverage
2008-06-03 . chapter 1
You are an amazing writer.
FeelLikeFlyin
2007-07-27 . chapter 1
That was incerdibly well written.
It always ** me off when people bash Ron so badly (maybe it's because he's my favorite character).
You write this in a way that was so very Ron, kind of not articulate while articulate at the same time. If that makes sense...
Mandy430
2006-12-30 . chapter 1
Wow. It was so beautifully written, I will never really look at Ron the same way again. I've always thought of him as just a bit of an idiot, but not to the lengths that the believers in the Hermione and Harry or Hermione and Draco relationships do. The last two lines were so sweet. I really want them to get together in the seventh book. It ** me off every time I read the books and they just mope around, fighting.

I love your writing, keep up the good work!

~Mandy (FuzzMonster)
rebelagainstthesystem
2006-12-09 . chapter 1
omg that was beautiful. i absolutely love it. omg. just omg.
angeliclin
2006-10-24 . chapter 1
Beautiful writing style. You were able to convey his thoughts wonderfully. I especiall like the last line.
Lirazel
2006-07-22 . chapter 1
Absolutely perfect.

I must admit that I only read this because of your pen name (I laughed for quite some time), but then I read the author's note and agreed with every single thing that you said. Thank you for your defense of Ron, who is by far my favorite character.

This is the best apologetic for him as a character that I could imagine. I love your prose; it was a little stilted, in a very Ron-like way, yet strangely poetic. This is truly one of the best glimpses inside Ron's head that I've ever read. I'll be adding it to my favorites list, and I can't wait to read your other works.

Thank you again for this wonderful story.
bec7012
2006-05-03 . chapter 1
that was lovely, really well written. Also as for your motuve, poor Ron! How can anyone hate Ron!
HanaDear
2006-04-30 . chapter 1
i love ur writing style!
fghgf
2006-04-22 . chapter 1
really cool
Perfect Bliss
2006-04-22 . chapter 1
Hey! I loved this. So beautiful and the way its written it's amazing how you pierce your words together. I love Ron he is one of my favorite characters! really... I can't believe that someone wouldn't like him. Ow I read your other stories (the one-shots) they are amazing. I like a lot your writing style. Great works... keep going :D
My Sharpie Is Green
2006-02-28 . chapter 1
Fantastic--you are a really amazing writer!
asfd
2006-02-20 . chapter 1
one word: beautiful.
mashimaromadness
2006-02-07 . chapter 1
That was incredibly well written. I have to only sort of agree with your sentiment at the beginning. I think the Ron of the books it an overall good guy, although he can be a bit of a slimy prat every once and a while. But in terms of fanfiction, I go either way. I just like to get caught up in the feeling of the story. Sometimes I'll love Ron, and sometimes he'll be my least favorite character. I let the story's tone sweep me away. It's actually quite nice. But... maybe that's why that person left that review. Maybe they were caught up in the story so they hated Ron and the moment, and they let it into their review. Then again, maybe not. I know there are a lot of Ron haters out there, but I think most of them base it purely off fanfiction and not off the real books. Okay, rant over. I really loved this story. It was beautifully written, and I can especially appriciate that right now, because I just got done reading all the works of a terrible author. It's good to be back to quality work. Very nice. Very nice indeed.
SilenceAbound
2006-02-04 . chapter 1
Beautiful, as always. I'm glad there's someone who appreciates Ron.
DOJ
2006-01-30 . chapter 1
I have to admit, when I read your summary I thought this was an AntiRon story...making me hesitant to read. But you've done it, you've captured every bit of Ron's essence in three quick parts. It was fantastic.

~*~DOJ~*~
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