VISUAL OWNAGE!
I enjoyed the imagery of your writing, it was very pretty to watch! Nami felt in character minus the lack of Luffy beatings and Luffy felt like his spacey self but not at all like is funny hyperactive self though it could have been the weird hunger.
They should go on a treasure hunt! I would like to read that. Anyway I also am a sucker for comfy sleep fics where the characters platonicly just enjoy sleeping close to each other.
That was worth reading, good job! :)

Aw happy endings for the win! Excellent job for your first romance themed fic. You should write more! Great build up and a superb happy ending just how a nice fluffy fic should be.

hey, it satisfied my hunger for a good fic.

really sweet ^^

Loved It!

Aw..the Luffy is soo innocent in this one, very much like what I would expect from him. Good job, Nami is very in character as well.

Aw! That was so cute! Loved it! especially the butterflies!^_^

aw, what asweet story. i loved it and the characterization was good. i love that very graphical & sweet ending. please write more like this.

Ja Ne! :D :)

FirestormAngelBlaze

What a very romantic LuffyxNami fic. It's so sweet. Great for your first attempt at romance and a first oneshot. Favs list, heehee!

Wow... that was so pretty. It's the first LuNa fic i read, and i'm amazed on how pretty and sweet and perfect it was.

You've got talent! I really loved it!

its great..

Beautiful. Extremely Beautiful! I am not much of a writer but i truly am a reader and artist. The Imagery in your writing was magnificent and if i practice in my art, this would make a perfect doujinshi! I believe you captured everyones character quite perfectly. It's one of those "i can see this happeneing". :) Again, Beautiful story left me with butterflies in my stomach! Total favorite!

Such as sweet storie. I watch One Piece every morning and the episode whereLuffy pits his hat on Nami's head made me think they should be together. hehehe. so i typed in google One Piece fan fiction and yeah of course i went to the Luffy/Nami stories. I loved this one personally, though I think you missed Luffy's character a lot, i know he was supposed to be acting different, but it didn't seam like him AT ALL. it made me thing they were different people, but I liked the story. Hhahah good job. Luffy is so hot. hahaha, i am a funny one.

Jaderade

This FF is one of the greatest ones I've ever seen! It's so cute! (I draw a picture for the FF *_* with one mistake -.-'' no flowers)

I thought it was good.