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Lord of Murder
2009-05-13 . chapter 1
Aw happy endings for the win! Excellent job for your first romance themed fic. You should write more! Great build up and a superb happy ending just how a nice fluffy fic should be.
jancreig
2008-10-21 . chapter 1
hey, it satisfied my hunger for a good fic.
snowman794
2008-09-15 . chapter 1
really sweet ^^
LuffyxRuby
2008-02-17 . chapter 1
Loved It!
Cloner4000
2008-01-30 . chapter 1
Aw..the Luffy is soo innocent in this one, very much like what I would expect from him. Good job, Nami is very in character as well.
Kaydreams
2007-10-06 . chapter 1
Aw! That was so cute! Loved it! especially the butterflies!^_^
FirestormAngelBlaze
2007-09-18 . chapter 1
aw, what asweet story. i loved it and the characterization was good. i love that very graphical & sweet ending. please write more like this.

Ja Ne! :D :)

FirestormAngelBlaze
Raven the Ravenous
2007-08-13 . chapter 1
What a very romantic LuffyxNami fic. It's so sweet. Great for your first attempt at romance and a first oneshot. Favs list, heehee!
Irenukka
2007-06-24 . chapter 1
Wow... that was so pretty. It's the first LuNa fic i read, and i'm amazed on how pretty and sweet and perfect it was.

You've got talent! I really loved it!
yuMeNami
2007-04-23 . chapter 1
its great..
Mikki05
2007-04-11 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Extremely Beautiful! I am not much of a writer but i truly am a reader and artist. The Imagery in your writing was magnificent and if i practice in my art, this would make a perfect doujinshi! I believe you captured everyones character quite perfectly. It's one of those "i can see this happeneing". :) Again, Beautiful story left me with butterflies in my stomach! Total favorite!
Jade
2006-12-20 . chapter 1
Such as sweet storie. I watch One Piece every morning and the episode whereLuffy pits his hat on Nami's head made me think they should be together. hehehe. so i typed in google One Piece fan fiction and yeah of course i went to the Luffy/Nami stories. I loved this one personally, though I think you missed Luffy's character a lot, i know he was supposed to be acting different, but it didn't seam like him AT ALL. it made me thing they were different people, but I liked the story. Hhahah good job. Luffy is so hot. hahaha, i am a funny one.

Jaderade
Demonic Banshee
2006-10-29 . chapter 1
This FF is one of the greatest ones I've ever seen! It's so cute! (I draw a picture for the FF *_* with one mistake -.-'' no flowers)
Rago Dragovian
2006-09-09 . chapter 1
I thought it was good.
asdfadfasdfadf
2006-06-24 . chapter 1
loved it!
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