Reviews for Faoi Dheireadh

Reviews For: Faoi Dheireadh - Reviews: Page 1 of 18

JimmyP 2008-04-17 ch 67,	abuseJust want to say fantastic story. I started reading this ages ago (I'd say at least a year) but forgot how to spell the name and couldn't find it for a very long time until I accidentally stumbled upon it again. Thank god I did as this is the best story I've read on here from any fandom. Muchos kudos to you! Can't wait to read Reversus Patria. P.S. how do you pronounce the title and what does it mean? I've got the strange feeling you've told us before but I can't find it anywhere
WBH21C 2008-02-28 ch 67,	abuseSo very well done!
Phoenix 2007-11-14 ch 67, anon.	abuseThis is a truly well written story, I at times can actually see myself inside the world within your words. I can see myself standing beside Adama, Roslin and the others quite easily. For me this is a sign of your talent as a writer. I only just wish to ask, the Ending you had before. Did you feel that it needed more?? I admit that Chapter 69 was quite a good ending for the story and it easily left an opening for the next. Thou I can only guess that our story teller in that universe is the Son of Felix Geata and Angela Glennan Geata. But I admit that this ending is also quite good, and I HAPPILY await the next story Reversus Patria. Thanks to You a True Writer.
Anastashia 2007-10-29 ch 32,	abuseSoblet's an, well I won't say the word I'm thinking because I don't know if it's allowed here. For a liasion to act that way to the people he's assigned to is totally unacceptable. Plus, to treat a subordinate who's doing the job that she was assigned to is uncalled for.
Anastashia 2007-10-29 ch 25,	abuseI'm really enjoying your story. I realize you're saying this ship's history is not with the US Navy. With a US ship though Roslin would have been announced "Twelve Colonies, arriving" when piped aboard.
Dradis 2007-09-26 ch 67, anon.	abuseI noticed you took the "finis" off of Chapter 67. I was a bit suprised to see it end like that but am rather happy you have decided not to end it yet (?) If thats what i'm seeing. I hope you arent doing it out of pressure, but best of luck with continuing the story and I can't wait to see whats next.
carolann 2007-09-23 ch 67,	abuseI don't know exactly what to say so I'll just go ahead and say it. I've enjoyed this story a lot and reread it several times. The last chapter was good and then out of the blue a disjointed epilog seemed to be slapped onto it. I can understand if you're tired of writing the story and wanted to either take a break or just not continue. I got the impression that you didn't want to leave it hanging so just tacked something onto your last chapter to end it. I don't expect stories to go on forever but I do feel that the epilog didn't do justice to the story and didn't fit with what you just wrote in the previous chapter.
archiev 2007-09-20 ch 67,	abuseHeck of a way to end a story. Enjoyed it tho. Thanks.
James Axelrad 2007-09-20 ch 67,	abuseencore
MondoMage 2007-09-20 ch 67,	abuseI have to agree. That ending - if you want to call it that - came completely out of nowhere. Up until that last part it was another great chapter, then... WHAM! So totally not what I was expecting, and not it a good way, either. I've been enjoying this story so far, but this last chapter is rather disappointing.
Naitch03 2007-09-20 ch 67,	abuseOkay...I have to say, first off that I have really enjoyed this series. I enjoyed what you did with the characters and where you went with all of them. And then I read this chapter. That ending came out of absolutely NOWHERE. The only thing I can think of is that you just don't have the time to write anymore, so you just decided to end it. I truly hope you either write a sequel, or revise this chapter to take out that ending. Thank you for all the hard work, Naitch03
WHCnelson 2007-09-09 ch 66,	abuseThis is a very good story update soon please
grayangle 2007-08-29 ch 66,	abuseI would have gotten to this sooner but I been busy getting a job and waiting for all the paper work to finally clear so I can start and the weather sent us a few bad blows. Luckily we just had to clean up some fallen trees. Another good chapter you have crafted for us readers. Now then what is going to happen with Tigh and the others? And what about the Cylon campain? Also will we get to know about some of the other beings that travel the space lines? So many questions that would be great answard in the next chatper. More please.
archiev 2007-08-28 ch 66,	abuseVery nicely done, thanks for the update.
carolann 2007-08-27 ch 66,	abuseI'm sorry that Sam turned out to be the evil cylon. I loved him and Kara as a couple and liked his character. I'm glad that they finally realize that Tory could be a cylon. I'm wondering who they'll replace Gaeta with. Thanks for sharing.

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