This is good. I wasn't sure at first but I really like it. Keep writing. If you abandon this story I will be worst than Bellatrix Lestrange.

i think u should update soon and have bella adn serires togehter and at some point get harry with tonks or a nuther female

can't wait for the next chapter its good so far

Not bad. Though I believe the reason that Neville survived was the fact he was actually at his Grans.
You could do with longer chapters though

wow im really liking this story! cant wait for more...

I do hope you update soon this story is very interesting and has me hooked already, I love it!

Hopefully the slash is Remus/Sirius. I happen to be fan of Bella/Harry. I know I'm not talking now, but long down the road.

good story so far and update soon its great so i can't wait for more.

Interesting start! I love the idea of Bellatrix and Sirius raising Harry together, though I wonder what the portrait is going to say as they enter Grimmauld palace with the child of a "pure-blood" and a "Mudblood". I can imagine it now... "Filthy Half-blood child! Get it out of my home- oh, hello there, Bellatrix."

Cool

Seems like the start to a really good story. I wish the chapters were longer. Hope you continue soon!

Andromeda and Narcissa were Bellatrix's sisters not cousins. Sirius and Regulus were her cousins.

I would love to see what you write next. I love what you have for the story so far I can't what white the end of the story.




Thank you,



Terri

Snape and Metamamorphmagus Harry

I like the start of the story, it's an exciting twist to the usual, harry gets raised by someone else. I can't wait to see how bellatrix and sirius react together when harry is growing up. In thought of the knicknames, i thought of a couple of mythological ones, Bran means raven in irish and welsh, but it might be a bit bland, Deimos means terror in greek, and Oisin meaning "little deer" from Irish mythology. Anyway, hope these gives you some ideas. Can't wait for the update