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Beth5572
2007-09-21
ch 4,
abuseI would love to see what you write next. I love what you have for the story so far I can't what white the end of the story.




Thank you,



Terri
Lily1Snape
2007-03-10
ch 3, anon.
abuseSnape and Metamamorphmagus Harry
Storyteller Person
2007-02-09
ch 4,
abuseI like the start of the story, it's an exciting twist to the usual, harry gets raised by someone else. I can't wait to see how bellatrix and sirius react together when harry is growing up. In thought of the knicknames, i thought of a couple of mythological ones, Bran means raven in irish and welsh, but it might be a bit bland, Deimos means terror in greek, and Oisin meaning "little deer" from Irish mythology. Anyway, hope these gives you some ideas. Can't wait for the update
Shinigami
2007-01-14
ch 4, anon.
abuse*muses* SO even Bellatrix has limits. I guess she couldn't go through with murdering an innocent kid...So how will Neville turn out? PLS have Siri and Remus get involved! And bring Snape in as an ally! PLS have Narcissa help Bella out! Surely she wouldn't want the Light side to get ahold of Harry and turn him INTO a pawn! Harry's only a baby! He's around her son's age!
DragonWolf of Chaos
2006-11-01
ch 4,
abuseI think a good nickname would be Loki,god of mischief, because he is the son of a Marauder, and as this story sounds dark, Loki is slightly evil...Sounds good to me...Update soon!!
Isa the FagHag
2006-10-17
ch 4,
abuseI just found this story and I love it so far!
I really hope you update soon.
ninha
2006-10-15
ch 4, anon.
abusehey! great fic! i think remus/sirius would be better cuz' snape hate sirius so... harry could be called her or something bcause it looks like harry and bcause of hercules! a lot of ppl said he could be called zeus because of the lightning bolt, so hercules is the son of zeus too...

harry really shoud be a metamophomagus cuz it would be fun!

really good plot... i always thought bout how would it be... bella and some good guy living together and everything... this is the firt time i see it and really like it!

update soon!
ninha, d 1 u luv to hate!
GoddessQueenIsis
2006-09-22
ch 4,
abusethis seem like a really good story so far, please update soon!! umm, as for a nickname for harry... i like green-eyes
Allison Snape
2006-08-27
ch 4,
abuseI suggest Zeus, because of the lightining bolt! Please update soon!
wover03
2006-08-17
ch 4,
abuseI like! keep up the good work! I don't really have a nickname in mind for harry or a reason but from the nicknames you suggested I like green-eyes the best! good job on the unfolding of the event's, I like the plot line so far!

:oP
I 'heart' Kouga and Miroku
2006-08-02
ch 4,
abuseHow about Atlas? Atlas was the son of Iapetus. Unlike his brothers Prometheus and Epimetheus, Atlas fought with the other Titans supporting Cronus against Zeus. Due to Cronus's advance age Atlas lead the Titan's in battle. As a result he was singled out by Zeus for a special punishment and made to hold up the world on his back.

Update soon!

~*Celia*~
-Atrum.Decor-
2006-07-29
ch 4,
abuseAwesome fic so far. Hurry and update, and could you try to make the chapters a bit longer?
D. Taggert
2006-07-13
ch 4,
abuseHere are some nick-names I like: Hermes (cause Hermes had wings on his feet, and you could do when Harry rides a broom!), and...well, thats all I can think of.
Please update soon!
D. Taggert
2006-07-13
ch 3,
abuseI actually haven't read any stories with a metamorphagus Harry, and I think Sirius should be with Remus!
GO PADFOOT AND MOONY 4EVA!
the strange elf
2006-07-12
ch 4, anon.
abusehiya! i really like the story so far! not many people can come up with original stories at the moment so it's good to see some imagination. My suggestions for harry's nick name are Bolts or Apollo. Plz update soon! ^_^
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