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Neferius 2008-05-28 ch 21,	abuseThe goddesses are back in heaven, all is right with the world. It's sad that the Sayoko we knew is gone, though her soul was consumed, it could still exist within Loki. What future awaits, I'm anxious to find out. Read ya Later.
shaithis1 2008-03-17 ch 20,	abuseThere is definitely something horribly unsettling about Sayoko trying to get her son into a relationship with Arael and referring to it as "late night aerobics in bed". DEFINITELY not motherly. Guess she forgot what being a mother was like due to being dead a few years.
shaithis1 2008-03-14 ch 9,	abuseGood chapter. The overabundance of blushing is getting a tad annoying, but then again this is based off of an anime, and blushing is their bread and butter. Besides, its Arael we are talking about, what else is she supposed to do to show interest. On another note, I bashed the series Saber Marionette J in another of Slayer6's stories simply from seeing a character collage from the show. In the interest of fairness I rented the series to see if I was missing anything and maybe Slayer6 was onto something. 3 episodes later and I am in therapy. I packed all 5 disks up and immediately shipped them back. Part of it is that the artwork is a little dated by today's standards, but the animation, scripting, and complete overuse of super-deformation are so horrible I just could not do it. Since I am a glutton for punishment and am loathe to miss anything that might be of value, I still plan on checking out SM R and SM J-X just to see if any improvements were made in those, but I don't hold out a lot of hope.
shaithis1 2008-03-12 ch 6,	abuseGreat story so far, but MY GOD is this AU getting complicated! 4 generations of characters from at least 4 different series plus original ones, 2 planets, and 10 years of history to keep track of, and the different stories take place in different parts of the timelines (and even jump within a single story sometimes), with snippets of other stories in it as teasers and other stories filling in missing parts of the timelines, me trying to sort it all out while apparently reading the stories out of order (I have them all sorted by publish date so new stories don't get added behind me - don't want to miss anything). Honestly, this is getting as complicated as a soap opera or something! I can hardly keep track of who is related to whome. Guess I need to write up a family tree or something. Anyway, a good read.
Sailor Enlil 2007-10-14 ch 21,	abuseSorry for the very late review. So wraps up the end of the world, so to speak. So what's gonna happen now with Loki on the run? Any plans on another epic battle between him and Sayoko? If so I have an idea - based on the last meeting with the council, Loki is hiding in a pocket universe, and in NGG Angel 2, Sayoko mentioned some universes with "modified mortals" as superheros. Perhaps the next saga ought to include them. My idea: How about Loki assuming the role as he was portrayed in Marvel Comics, and Sayoko joins forces with the Avengers in her hunt for him? What do you say?
Anexsis Hirotomi 2006-03-13 ch 21,	abuseShort review comming up. I just wanted to know that I have Read, Liked, was very happy about these two chappies and yes I have questions but they will have to be asked on an e-mail of something like that. JA-NE! ps-VERY happy to read the previews of your next fics. Can't wait till they become full stories!
Barricade 2006-03-11 ch 20,	abuseForgot to add this in my review - Soultaker is now a great-grandmother, and this should be a fun read, especially if Yoko for the first time meeting her 'now' calls her Grandma for all the universe to hear. That and Hild is a great-Aunt as well. Finally - Did the original Morning Bell also go 'poof' when the original Sayoko's soul was stolen, or is she still there for 'new/future' Sayoko to use?
Barricade 2006-03-11 ch 21,	abuseARGH! I go on a mini-break and come back and its finished! Arael/Sentaro - w00t! This could be hilarious, especially with Megami around running interference between the two. Wonder if there is a demon/god they can set her up with? Sayoko - I figured this was how you were going to pull it off after her death. Thing is I know for a fact you left yourself a way out to bring back the original Sayoko - The Soultaker was able to deposit Kaji, Misato, Maya, and several other souls into the demon/SEELE produced mass production EVAs AFTER she had 'sucked' them out, and those did show up in heaven afterwards. So since Sayoko's original body is still up and running, and Mana does have the ability to pull out a soul, I wonder if she'll pull out the original Sayoko soul from Loki, and deposit back into her body (which of course could be a very interesting experience in that two souls in one body...that or if Sayoko gets pregnant again her older self might get 'pushed' into the baby). Ah, so many options. Alt-verse - rats, was expecting more from them, and I'm amazed that that wasn't Loki's targetted jump, as he would have had Hild herself on his side and codes to bring down Heaven near completely, ESPECIALLY if his alt-self was available to double-up on planning.
Mist Hero 2006-03-08 ch 21,	abuseI knew you would use the Future Sayoko on the ded Sayoko. Somehow i think Loki might use the Sayoko he has... Pretty nice, and i look forward to your other following stories. And love is in the air for Arael and Sentaro~~ and get them good darn didn't see a part of yur updates on my email. (/me shoots at the person who kidnaps 5 year old Sayoko) wth, where did that come from? i thought Urd and Skuld kept a good watch at Sayoko? i mean they just came from losing their beloved Sister/Mom, they should be in full alert. sigh, ah wells i think you have an idea going so why not, while i think on dealing with my own story timeline ^^ and so the biggest adventure hunt for Loki begins, hah good luck on doing so Sayoko!! Jane! Mist Hero PS. I swear i've been watching too much Anime DVDs and AMVs for awhile now (I was waiting for yur update, along others) and the japanese lang is killing me ;_;. Some of what i've watched (and still repeatedly watching) NGE (not with the EoE), Shaman King, Get Backers, AMG and DBZ Brolly's Return.
Marcos Edson 2006-03-05 ch 21,	abuseEh, Megami interested in a demon, and former evil cat of all, that would be fun... :P And what a way to make Arael (and everybody else, while at it...^^) know what Sentaro's feelings are... :) Way to go, Arael! Good to see she's picking the gist real fast. Sayoko leadind the Loki Searching Team, Mana is along... This can't be good... for him... evil grin The previews look good, looks like we'll get to know a bit more about Cayla and see how Sentaro's and Arael's romance go... :) The third one... is the most intriguing... If I were to guess, that one is a young AU Sayoko, the story taking place not long after "Past Revisited"... unless this is yet another AU (why not?)... And while this may be just a coincidence, "unshaven" is often used to describe a certain Eva character...
Marcos Edson 2006-03-05 ch 20,	abuseWell, the moment of revelation was tense... I could almost picture Sayoko suggesting to leave, letting an empty body behind, before Belldandy accepts her... So, it seems Present Sayoko is really gone... but I guess some of us will only really accept that when Loki is killed, burnt and buried... not necessarily in this order... Yoko is safe... ^_^ It would be fun to see Shinji's reaction if Asuka and Mana arrived to a "sharing baka" agreement in Yoko's benefit... :)
Zero Asakura 2006-03-04 ch 21,	abusea really good fic Mana Kirishima rulez!
Anexsis Hirotomi 2006-02-28 ch 19,	abuseDoes little happy dance Sayoko’s Alive Sayoko’s Alive! Well sort of…we have Ghost Sayoko taking over Present Sayoko's vacant body. Lovely. What happens if they ever get Present Sayoko’s soul back from Loki? A fight over Sayoko’s body? It would be very confusing. Too bad they didn’t have that cloning machine still then they could give a body to…WAIT! OMG did I just write that!?! AH I’m turning into Gendo! AH! Slaps self in face sorry… anywho, I wonder what’s going to happen to Yoko. Now that she doesn’t have a special friend…well not a ghost one anyways. Who is she going to stay with? Keima, her “Mom”, her “Dad”, or Special Sayoko. (I like calling her S Sayoko better than what the other reviewers are calling her…Zombie Sayoko… She is NOT a Zombie! She’s just Special. It’s not like she’s the un-dead.)And Angels. I want to know if Special Sayoko has her old Angel, Present Sayoko’s Angel OR no Angel at all. Very confusing. Yay! Verdandi’s staying! Yup Yup I think that’s all for this review… Better go before they find out I’m here… JA-NE!
Marcos Edson 2006-02-25 ch 19,	abuseWow... There is not much to say aside that is was good... One thing about Earth's destruction bugs me... what was done of the souls of the people who died there, once Earth is to be reastored, I take their original souls will be returned... ah, well, just some nitpick to show how deep some of us read your series... :D Draco down, Loki to go, it would be fun if somehow both Sayokos, present and future, could give him his punishment... both died on his hands, afterall... And why 'Z' Sayoko's grin kinda scares me?
Marcos Edson 2006-02-25 ch 18,	abuseWhoa... This is creepy... 'Zombie' Sayoko looks like her when she was released of the Soultaker's control, centuries ago... but much more frightening... and I actually like it... O_O Very good, very good...

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