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| panther ninja 2007-11-01 ch 5,  | abusePlease please write more. :) |
| Agnes1014 2006-10-14 ch 5, | abuseUh what do you mean by perfect love? Does he like Susan... or a uh... unicorn? Please mail em back I am a tad bit confused... heh... |
| mayberry63 2006-05-06 ch 5, | abuseVery interesting... hurry up and update please!! |
| HighlanderQueen 2006-05-04 ch 5, | abuseaw! i love it! i love thatthe first thing out of his mouth was "susan". how lovely is that? and you mentioned my story! much love to you. can't wait to see what happens next! -chelseypudge love how you integrated your story with the movie...do more of that! |
| Silent Cobra 2006-04-12 ch 4, | abuseI hope you continue this soon, it's very good. |
| HighlanderQueen 2006-04-09 ch 4, | abuseHey! oh, look! you mentioned me!! i feel so special! congrats! i love how you strayed from the movie for awhile! it has added a lot. the chapter was a little short though, would have loved to have seen it longer. but i'm happy with it now too! ok, i'm gonna poke at the third chapter of my story. i could use some inspiration!! later! -chelsey_pudge |
| Telboriel 2006-04-06 ch 3, | abuseGood story!! I like Centaur's, and you really don't know what's going on with other characters in a book or movie unless it's important to tell. I am really looking forward to reading more of this story and seeing where it goes!! Please update soon. |
| HighlanderQueen 2006-04-05 ch 3, | abusehello there! loving the story. it's a tid-bit short though...more detail would be good. i loved that you used an element that wasn't in the film. keep going with that. i can understand if you want to follow the timeline of the film, but it would be cool if you could slow things down just a little to describe what the character is feeling and what all is going on. i notice that oreius is showing interest in susan...an interesting choice. i would have never paired the two, but i'm sure you can prove to me that they are meant for each other. good luck to you and i'll keep watching! -chelsey_pudge |
| lampost 2006-02-20 ch 2, | abuseI think this story is magnificent. I cant wait to see what you are going to do to it. I think you could take this story far. Keep going. Your on my favorites. |
| Natalia101 2006-02-07 ch 2, | abuseYah! New Chapter! I liked it. Oreius seems to be really nice even thought he kind of looks intimidating( well, I see him as an indtimidating guy) Anyway, please update soon! |
| Darth Hoodlum-A Pirate 2006-01-30 ch 1, | abuseHurry and finish it, before I become vicious! Just kidding^^ I liked it and I want you to add to it. |
| mis.mira 2006-01-30 ch 1, | abuseInteresting... * stroke non-existant beard* But it was a tad short... Update! Mira ;) P.S. Don't let him fall for Susan,please... |
| Natalia101 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. Will this be a romance? Between Susan and Orieus? It kind of seemed like he was paying her attention. Anyway, I hope you update soon so I can find out more! |
| Capegio 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abuseOuch. Interesting idea, but please leave off the romance. Narnia doesn't need it. ::whines:: |