The whole formal dance atmosphere made the first part moderately surreal and rather awesome. And Aeryn as a mom is very cute.

cute very nice :)

great intro.. you better be writing more!

i'm axcited at seeing where this goes!

you write for the characters really well!

Good start - dying to know what happens next, more please !

Faboo. Is that it or are you planning more? I sure hope so. :D

AL

Nice storie.

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this story screams for a sequel.

This is great! I hope to see more soon. Thank you.