What a sweet story!

i have a little brother too... i totaly understand

It does explain all... brothers, love them but never understand them! I'm glad you updated and are past the WRITERS BLOCK, it is very evil... I have it! soz this is ionalama signed on sisters account... Yes I am cursed I have one of them to!
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WRITE MORE!

Ooh! You might continue? Yay! You'll have to tell me!

PS Tell LandUnderWave not to beat you with breadsticks, 'cos if you don't keep going, I will!

Gods all bless!

~no one of consequence

well, this is good, but i thought there could be some symbolism in the naming of the baby...

at any rate, neal is the epitome of coolness. hint hint, include neal...

the powers of my subtle(not) hinting, must prevail! please?

update soon!

haha the perks.. ur such a funny person.. lol... update soon..or noe whatever u prefer
caiti

YAY! Tx for updating, and I promise no breadsticks! And I have a little brother too. And today's my BIRTHDAY!

nice chapter but it was a bit predictable. Still keep writing!

YOU.ARE.SO.MEAN!
please continue the story
YOU.MUST!YOU.MUST!

what about mrs. wyldon?? whatever happened to her?? did she die tragically.. lol.. this story is so funny.. update like now...
Caiti

Gar. I am very mad at you. BUT my imagination tends to run a bit rampant at times, especially with situations like this. Hee. If you see something that says "Continuation of Wyldon's Lover," don't be mad at me.

~Drop Your Oboe

AH! Wyldon has a girlfriend! And I will beat you over the head with breadsticks if you do not continue this!

what is this, a soap opera?! well, whatever, i guess there have to be some people who like them, otherwise they wouldn't be on the air...

it is good though.

AAH! WYLDON WITH A GIRLFRIEND! IT'S THE APOCALYPSE! (this actually is a good story though)

you realize Wyldon actually has a wife? Mentions it at the end of Squire... If you don't care (I just mentioned it so you would know) my only suggestion is to make it less hurried... longer

I like it but it evolves too quickly to be as effective as it could be...

~*Erkith*~

PS. I've no idea if Roald has a kid... sorry