it's good
i like the plot
can u clarify how old they are?

OMG! I absolutely adore this fic! XD I love how you actually type the duels instead of skipping them like most do. Plus yay! Kaiba Jr is awesome! I love the originality here. Please update soon,

AF

please excuse all the obvious mistakes such as spelling and grammar. I will redo the chapters with mistakes in them at a later date. I'm pretty much a perfectionist when it comes to my typing lol. Seeing all these mistakes is really getting on my nerves.

Interesting story. I like that Kisara isn't a wimp, which most people tend to make her. Keep writeing!! ^.~

er...sorry, i ddnt find the second half of this chapter very entertaining. i only watched ygo for the ppl. =P but ur doing well. i don't even know how to duel.

You know, this story is very interesting. Although I've read many damsel in distress and new student stories of Kisara, I'm still intrigued by them and this is a great fanfic! Please update soon! I look forward to reading the rest! This truly is a unique story...

Insightful. You capture the hardening of Seto's heart, but you transition smoothly to what appears to be a new leaf on the otherwise barrent tree of Seto Kaiba's life. I look forward to the next post:)

lol, this is a pretty weird story. funny but weird...and...sorta creepy, especially about the son thing :P o well, this is definetly gonna b interesting. ~WDW