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| Iheartpiper 2008-06-15 ch 24, | abuseOMG. It's so cute. You did a really great job capturing Piper, which I've seen to be a very dificult feat. I loved the story. I cried, I laughed. You deserve a grammy. |
| vampire-luvr 2008-06-12 ch 24, | abuseaw...i like it |
| vampire-luvr 2008-06-12 ch 4, | abusesad, but funny |
| Aurinko 2008-05-27 ch 24, | abuseAbsolutely wonderful. Utterly romantic, brilliant characterization, and very real pain and problems for our favourite couple. Thanks for sharing! |
| Aurinko 2008-05-27 ch 4, | abuseReally like the idea here that Piper tells a story about the three of them as children and that's how you know it's Leo and not Dan. Nice, cute, especially the story party; Phoebe-centric and therefore believable but still fun. |
| LilMizPiper 2008-03-19 ch 9, | abuseWow! You are really talented, these stories are just amazing! I love in Chapter 4 how Piper's middle name is Calandra, I think it suits her. I love the ending of that chapter too, how she went to Dan but he wasn't interested. And I love how in Chapter 6 Piper's fighting with her brain about who she loves more, lol. |
| charmedone112685 2007-12-31 ch 24, | abuseWow. Seriously, wow. These were really well written, the characters were pretty much spot on...I am in awe...like seriously bowing down to you here. Usually I'm not much for one-shot stories, and although yours in a collection of them, I was still skeptical at first. But wow...you intertwined them with the show so beautifully, especially the season 8 bits, and I can't help but think that may have something to do with the fact that you may have been writing it during season 8. The show left a lot to be desired with Piper/Leo scenes (yet Phoebe always managed to have romantic relationship stuff in an abundance of episodes, but I digress,) and one scene I always felt robbed of as a Piper/Leo fan was her telling him she was pregnant. I never felt it was fair Phoebe and Paige knew before Leo...hell, I never thought it was fair that Phoebe was the one who told Piper she was pregnant, but again I digress. My point is that you included it, and all these wonderful one-shots are absolutely brilliant. I can tell the time and effort that went into this collection...much more time and effort than Brad Kern ever placed in this couple. The Vaya Con Leos bit had me in tears...it was just so dead on, and I could picture Holly delivering ever word of it on film...it was high time Piper broke like she did in your piece, she deserved it...and I really loved how you had her being the Elder conspiracy theorist going through the entire season 8 bit. That is SO Piper...she never liked them, and it was great to see that included in there. Also I was glad to see that you never had Piper forgive Billie. I hated that character with a passion...and why Phoebe was dumb enough to let her back in I never really understood. But strangely enough what you had her say to Piper helped me realize why Phoebe was so accepting of her. Now I still don't forgive her by any means, but I do understand Phoebe's POV, which honestly doesn't happen very often at all. And in all honesty, I think even Holly herself would be proud of that. Someone...I think Brad Kern...said in the commentary to the final episode that he didn't think Holly ever felt Piper should forgive Billie or that Billie should be redeamed or forgiven, so I think she would have enjoyed that particular part. Also, I really enjoyed drunk Piper. It made me think back to Long Live the Queen when Piper was drinking her whiskey and fell off the barstool...and the line about driving to the club to get the alcohol then driving back and then getting drunk is such a drunk Piper line! And your take on Piper's depression after Prue's death was also spot on. I'm sorry, I know this was a long review...okay, so long is probably an understatment. But I just saw the piece tonight, so I'm reviewing all of your chapters. Your pieces were all so brilliant...and I'll probably go back an reread them in the future when I need a good Piper and Leo fix, as well as recommending it to a good friend of mine who would enjoy reading it as well. You are a very talented writer. This is truly one of the best Charmed fanfics I've seen, as most seem like they're written by a twelve-year-old with all the grammatical, common sense, and general bad writing errors. I will most definitely check out your other Charmed pieces on the site when I get the chance. And you actually inspired me to go to my unfinished Charmed stories. They pale in comparison to yours, but I might actually finish them now...and I have an idea for another. So thanks for the inspiration! It was truly a pleasure reading your work, I hope you keep it up as your time allows. Megan |
| SinderfullShocker 2007-12-15 ch 24, | abuseThis was a great story from the very first chapter. I'm so sad its over. :( I look forward to more stories from you. |
| piperloveleoalways 2007-12-14 ch 24, | abusei cant believe it is finally over, this story made me laugh cry and just wanna hide i loved it and i wish you good luck on your other stories. |
| Strizzy 2007-12-14 ch 24, | abuseI really can't believe that this is all over! I have loved reading this story so much! |
| Corazon90 2007-12-14 ch 24, | abuseThis really is a beautiful chapter to end your story! I loved every bit of of this awesome work. I hope you'll never get tired of writing because you're really very good at it! |
| Leo's Leading Lady 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseI've been following your story since the very beginning. Why I am only writing a review now, I don't know. I just wanted to let you know that you are an amazing writer and I have truly enjoyed this story (and many other stories that you've written!) I'm a huge piper/leo fan and I would love to see you write another fic about them! Maybe one that would pic up after the show ended and go up until their third child was born? Just a thought. Thank you again for all of the time and effort that you put into this story! You're truly talented and I think this fic was flawless! |
| xheavilybroken 2007-12-13 ch 24, | abuseohh! that was so gorgeous. great normal ending! |
| du1387 2007-12-13 ch 24, | abuseWow, this story was amazing. Congrats on taking it all the way to the end. Not a lot of writers can do that. |
| charmedrocks 2007-12-13 ch 24, | abusegreat story... looking foward to the next |