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| randomblueeydblonde 2008-07-22 ch 15,  | abusethat was good..:) whens the next chapter coming? |
| buddies 2008-07-20 ch 15, | abusegreat update can't wait for more |
| xxClois-LuverXX 2008-07-18 ch 15, | abuseplease get Jess out of there UPDATE! |
| Metal-Battle-nYuu 2008-07-18 ch 15, | abuseyeah !! =D I was really happy to see the next chap of this story is on ^^ And it was really great =) Cannot wait for more ^_^ |
| Unbridled.mind 2008-07-17 ch 15, | abuseWe're getting somewhere but it's taking so long to do so. Just a tip; you might want to avoid having characters repeat what other characters say, and then having the original character repeat themselves e.g. Nicole and Colin. if you have a 10 word limit, it eats up the words and doesn't cover much ground in the process. I hope you post again and we start to see more resolutions because 15 chapters is a long time to wait for a break and I think your readers deserve that much. |
| Sheshe is my cat 2008-07-17 ch 15, | abuseI loved this chapter. Oh man, I hope you write more of this and another story after. Great job. |
| Unbridled.mind 2008-06-16 ch 14, | abuseI would really like to know why the guy is punishing Amelia and Jess like that and see Jess and Colin reunite. |
| BobWhite 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abusePlease go on with this story. It is going sumwear! |
| Sheshe is my cat 2008-04-20 ch 14, | abuseNice job again. I hope you can get back on track and write more. And I really hope you write another story after this one. You and I are the only writers left on this fandom that still write Jess-centered stories. (Okay, so mine isn't totally Jess-centered, but still) Anyway, nice job, keep going. -Abagail |
| Metal-Battle-nYuu 2008-04-19 ch 14, | abuseAnd again.. I canno say more than : GO ON =) ^_^ |
| buddies 2008-04-16 ch 14, | abusegreat update can't wait for more |
| Sheshe is my cat 2008-04-06 ch 12, | abuseNice job. Can't wait for chapter fourteen. -Abagail |
| Sheshe is my cat 2008-04-06 ch 5, | abuseOkay, so I've read the first five chapters and I'm off to the rest of them. I will review again when I read the second-to-the-last chapter (like I said I have already read the last chapter-that was great too.) but so far it's good! -Abagail |
| Sheshe is my cat 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI have clicked on this story a few times since it was published, but I haven't really been following it. I liked the last chapter though, so I am going re-read this and try to follow it every time it's updated. I like your ideas. -Abagail |
| Metal-Battle-nYuu 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseHey =) Great Chapter =) It really is and I'm looking forward to next one ^^ lg |