ooh Carey's gonna get it from Jack lol love the story please update soon

-DARKLUST

Hey! Just came across this one. Good story. I hope you come back to finish this one someday. It would be a real shame if you didn't. :)

so sweet! please keep writing : )

glad to see your story update please do it again soon.

you have to update this story.

I just read your story and I love it!

Please update soon.

It's a wonderfully developed story. The thing i don't understand is why the boogyman would be able to be seen by Fi who is 17 years old. The story of the boogyman was generated for those small children who have not lost the ability to amagine their hero who will defeat the monster that hids under the bed.

wow didnt expect and update this is really good happy you decided to continue update soon

I am really enjoying the story. Please update soon, so I can read, what fi finds out about her eyes glowing and the Bogey Man?

hey! i LOVE your story keep writing!

I really like the story so far, please update soon, so I can read what happens next.

Your summary says "The second part" are you referring to the second chapter...or is there a prequel? Anyway, I love the story, it's wicked that Fi's a semi-bad ass now. Just great.

come on finish it!

Love it!

this is really good are you going to update?

I mean I really really like this! please update