Huh, I really like this, though I usually don't like

script form. But this works fine. I like your Fala:-)

Stars, huh?

...Wow. All I can say is wow. (And sorry it took me so long to review.) That was beautiful, and so creative...! If I didn't admire your work, I'd be jealous. But I'm not; I just love the story. Hope all is well and you update soon!

I love how you've made Moira grow yet still retain her childish ways of pleasing Fala. The dialouge is natural; you seem to embody so much in so little. I love this story.

First of all, congrats on the update! Because you know this is one of my favorite stories on here of all time, so I'm glad you posted. It was short, but just what the story needed. I love the descriptions, the details of blood and beads and the light. Amazing. It was great how you added to the mood by making it rain, and how Moira and Fala spoke but without looking at each other. And you're keeping the theme of the stars is so sweet. If I had any constructive criticism at all, I'd give it to you. But I simply can't think of ANYTHING. So you'll have to settle for "great job"! :-)

Luv,

Dusk

I was a little bit sceptical when I saw that the story was in script format, but you make it *work*. Beautifully. I always thought that Fala was thin and boring in the book (all of ahar's villains are), but you bring her to life.

I haven't seen any fic for this particular fandom...well, ever. Very well written. VERY well written. Excellent choice of subject.

HEY! GREAT PLOT! LOVE THE STORY! I WRITE IN THIS BOOK SECTION TOO, BUT MY STORIES SUCK!

M...I'm in a very weepy mood so I almost cried from this lol...very good...loving how Moira's character still sounds young and eccentric, and the stars thing is awesome. I love every bit of it. Oh and the Italian? Made it more romantic lol. gotta go, I'll ttyl :)

Short and sad. Kind of nostalgic. I like it.

Oh, please keep writing it! I love it no kidding...and I need something to distract me right now so please post soon

]]dusk

Sorry I haven't reviewed in such a long time... Your reference to Drusilla fits Moira nicely... I love this story.

Yet again, absolutely BEAUTIFULLY written. I LOVE it. You are such a good writer, not even kidding. Keep writing, and thanks for the aknowledgement thing lol. i enjoy reading this!

Kels

ooh, absolutely awesome. i love it. yet again. it was good how you put the footnote there, and your descriptions let me SEE the scene playing in my mind. hope to read more soon!

_Kels

wow. write more! you have an amazing style, very descriptive...i can picture everything. love it so much!

Absolutely lovely. I had never realized the pair before from the books... but I'm going to have to reread the book to find it. This story is really great, please do continue you.