|Reviews for First Fire|
| SpiritoftheWhiteRose 6/20/08 . chapter 1
very well done
| The Poisoned Doughnut Of DOOM 6/15/06 . chapter 1
Wow. That's very deep. I like how Sarah, even then is self-centered and doesn't really worry that her best friend is being sick in the snow. It makes me think that maybe they were really never friends.
| Asparaga 3/1/06 . chapter 1
Wow. EXCELLENT. Actually, I really like the Sarah characterization - how cold she is now reflects her as Circe. You portrayed both of them wonderfully.
| xSlytherclaWx 2/26/06 . chapter 1
that was good... a bit confusing, but good
| coolmarauders 2/19/06 . chapter 1
o. I like this. THis is good. Keep up the good work!
| AlinaJaqui 2/6/06 . chapter 1
I. Love. It. It's brilliant! Is the fire supposed to be a foreshowing of her and Sarah dieing in the fire? And Sarah leaves her like she 'left' her in the book?