Whoa

very well done

Wow. That's very deep. I like how Sarah, even then is self-centered and doesn't really worry that her best friend is being sick in the snow. It makes me think that maybe they were really never friends.

Wow. EXCELLENT. Actually, I really like the Sarah characterization - how cold she is now reflects her as Circe. You portrayed both of them wonderfully.

that was good... a bit confusing, but good

o. I like this. THis is good. Keep up the good work!

I. Love. It. It's brilliant! Is the fire supposed to be a foreshowing of her and Sarah dieing in the fire? And Sarah leaves her like she 'left' her in the book?