Ooh, I wonder what happened to him. And this cliffhanger, ye Gads! :D

GREAT QUOTE: “ A bird without wings cannot fly in the sky of memories. But as long as we are alive new memories will create and a new life will bloom. ”

Keep it up!

Hiya!
Nice job -- I think you are off to a lovely start.
I enjoyed your lead into the story. The words you used were quite vivid and really created a haunting, dreamy image in my mind.
Speaking of image . . . I liked the Gary description. ^.^

Good luck as you continue!

Maia

p.s.- Wow, this *is* your first fan fic! CoNgRaTs!