This story made me laugh.

they're gonna do it on libby's bed...feel sry for her...ekk...lol ok well cool story you should prolly add more detail though...ok well ttyl bye

UltraLordIsReal-IM ALONE!AH

that was funny too! i figured his username included the name ultra lord...

sorta...but too short

HAHAHA! I LIKED IT WHEN SHEEN SAID THAT BETTY WOULD BE A SEXY HOT STEAMED TOMATO! haha!

kk... wat can i say about this story? i like the plotline but the characters are seriously out of character, the chapters r way 2 short, the grammar needs work n u shud really add more detail. wen did betty n jimmy go out, howd they break up? these r questions that shud have been answered in the beginning. n it went 2 quickly for the story 2 seem realistic (also w/ everyone being totally out of character it was unrealistic as well). this story could really use a rewrite, get a beta i suggest. just some friendly criticism.

Peace,

Cat

Atrocious grammar- beyond all belief. Storyline is mediocre at best- not terrible, but not good either.

Good sotry, poor grammar. Try to space out your speech, that will make it "fantastic!"

There is very little to say but that I liked this story and WOW...I sure didn't expect that...

Cool ending! The way Cindy is dressed, of course any guy will drool over her, especially the one that loves her the most.

Keep the good writing.

YES YOU ARE GOING TO WRITE ANOTHER FIC!*does a weird happy dance* I AM TOTALLY GOING TO READ IT! YOU BETTER E-MAIL ME WHEN YOU WILL FINALLY POST IT ON THIS WEBSITE! I MUST READ IT! OR I WILL GO NUTS!*therapists come* I said I ''will'' not I ''am''

Random Therapist: Oh, well then we will be waiting just in case

Pfft, I will just escape...as always. Anyway, I am happy that you finished this fic, the ending was kind of rushed but WHO CARES, good job, you are one of my fave writers*winks*

Untill next time

YOU BETTER POST THAT NEW FIC SOON

:.*Ashley*.:

So, should we hit him with a hammer, or wait untill the men in the white coats come?- Sheen Estevez, From the fic ''Camp DANGER''(it will appear in one of the chapters)

I like this, it's a very good plot, and you get extra points because I love Jimmy/Cindy! :-)

aw!that is the sweetest ending to a story i have ever read!you are a genius like jimmy!-

Oh, so you realized that NOW! wow Jim, for a genius you sure have a lot to learn about love. Anyway, great chapter! and thanks to you for using my ''Pretty boy'' line-

Untill the next chapter

:.*Ashley*.:

yay!good chapter!