E-hem! or Excuse me! FANGS, FANGS! No chance they dont have fangs thats partly the point of these vamps! Btw - gd story! i think sometimes u guys can b very cleva wen it coms to gessin bt things

i know you wrote this 3 years ago, but i think you should update it...i really want to know what happens next! x

Hi this story is really good. Please update

aw! PLEASE CONTINUE!

wow I absoltely loved thiss!!

are u going to write more stories? U should. you r so good!

I love it, well done!

aww!!

this is good

Wow. It was so awesome! (Except thefangs of course)
Very nicely worded.

wow!!

that was soo good. as if it was happenning!

that was GOOD!=D

Aww! They are meant to be! This is a good oneshot! I liked it.

cute very cute

Edward doesn't have fangs, you know. :)