This was good I wish they had done something like this on the show. Great job.

this was kind of cool for a short story.

i saw that eipsode. in fact i saw them all when it comes to charmed. i think that your story is just the right length. finishes things up without going on for to long. just sort of sticks to the point.

nice you should do more

This was great.

Very nice missing scene. I hope you do continue with going on doing more chapters.

yes do more. This is really good.

As I said before I enjoyed this story, but I'm not sure if more chapters are a good idea. I think some stories are meant to be short, and this one just might fit that category. If you do write more chapters, I will probably read them too.

yes

Yes

definately have grams give them there magic or something or them wanting it

cute

I would love to see more chapters on this story. But I dont know where youre headed with this.

LOVE MORE CHAPTERS.

HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON

This is one of the best stories I seen.

omg it is so good i really like your writing i was wondering if i could put ur profile page link on mine as one of ma favorite authors i would love to have it there let me know at thanx

de-anne

That one was nice. It went pretty much like I expected it to happen had they decided to use the following episode covering little Phoebe's return to the past.