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| Crystal Dragon Claw 2007-02-15 ch 17,  | abusePlease update soon, the tension is getting to be too much! I need to know what happens next! This is a great fic, keep up the great work! |
| IchthusFish 2006-07-24 ch 17, | abuseYay! You're back! Loving this. Keep going =) |
| CaptainCrash 2006-05-05 ch 16, | abusebrilliant... i cant wait for more... Loved the "oh boy" last chp... nice touch. |
| scottiedog 2006-02-28 ch 16, | abuseYou need to put comas where they need to be. Example: From the personal log at the bottom it says her Trip and I. It needs to read her, Trip, and I. Hopefully this help next time. Otherwise this is great! Keep up the good work! |
| firebirdgirl 2006-02-27 ch 16, | abuseHope he quits being mopey & depressed! Happy writing! |
| firebirdgirl 2006-02-27 ch 15, | abuseNice placement of the mistletoe...Happy writing! |
| DevilTwin 2006-02-22 ch 14, | abuseWell, I needed something to read at lunch, so I printed this out. I do think you should change the name of Kelly to Mary Sue. This is probably one of the most blatant "Mary Sues" I've stumbled across in a long time. Next time, you might want to stay clear of a similar plot. |
| JennMel 2006-02-19 ch 14, | abuseThis is great. Just a piece of advice though: when you switch between scenes with different characters, it makes it a lot easier to read if some sort of divide is put in. The again, this could be me being too lazy to work stuff out:D. This chapter was xcellent and i eagerly await more! |
| firebirdgirl 2006-02-18 ch 14, | abuseGlad everything turned out okay...Lookign forward to the Christmas party. Happy writing! |
| JennMel 2006-02-13 ch 13, | abuseThis is really good! I hope you update soon! |
| Triptacular 2006-02-12 ch 13, | abuseMalcolm's in trouble! Archer to the rescue!! Only it's not SuperArcher from the Captain's chair... (Personally, I'm more worried about Trip.) ; ) |
| firebirdgirl 2006-02-12 ch 13, | abuseDun DUn DUNN! I wonder who it was that took them and why...Happy writing! |
| Triptacular 2006-02-07 ch 12, | abuseI think I missed something. Why did Bower kill Alex Roberts? Just to set-up Malcolm? Excellent ending! ; ) |
| General Kunama 2006-02-07 ch 8, | abuseBloody brilliant! do continue |
| Triptacular 2006-02-07 ch 8, | abuseOh sure, you couldn't make THAT section longer? (I'm teasing) : ) These chapters have been great fun! Looking forward to more... |