While I cannot in any way condone the partial use of Japanese in this story, I would like to point out that this chapter should have used "senpai", as there is no "mm" by itself in Japanese. "M" is only used with other vowels, while the "nn" sound can be used in addition to "n" in conjunction with vowels.

Just for accuracy's sake, and that of my conscience, since you probably already know this; the story is 3 years old by now.

Well... Winry deserves that...Ed is with AL not her...AL. ^__^

Wow...that was amazing! Wnderfully written, I loved it!

I really, really liked "Sensory Deprivation".

*hearts* evil!roy is teh love XD this is a really great series of snapshots. yay for you!
... an archive of Fma doujin? Link please!

... Wow. That's all there is to say for this chapter. Just... wow. XD

You need to type up some more chapters! :D

"Sad: Chilled. Amber and topaz and other such gems—beautiful in their solidity, heart-breaking in their history. Old pain; bloody wars. Death." - Amazing.

This is THE best chapter you've written so far. O.o

Gorgeous ending. :D

Loved this chapter as well.

That made me drool so bad. XD

Who ever knew sentences could mean so much? :D

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

(To which Hawkeye—after later being let in on this insight by a horrified Mustang, Havoc, Brenda, Fury, and the rest— responded (quite eloquently): “No shit.”) - This entire story's going in my favorites 'cause of that line.