   pacificuser 11/29/09 . chapter 1Nice one! |
| Mad Dog Milne 10/11/07 . chapter 15 Not a bad story. As I said about the death of StormShadow, a bit anticlimtaic. The somewhat turnover of Johnathan was uplifting but I think there should have been more to the ending of this tale. |
| Mad Dog Milne 10/11/07 . chapter 13 Well at least Ol'Sarge went out the same way he came into this world: Fighting and Screaming! |
| Mad Dog Milne 10/11/07 . chapter 12 Bit of an anticlimatic end for StormShadow, huh? |
| Mad Dog Milne 10/11/07 . chapter 11 'Bout fragging time I see the Sarge in action! |
| Luigi and co 1/12/03 . chapter 1 Bush couldn't possibly use his mind at all, mainly because he doesn't have one. All of his speeches are pre-prepared scripts. Oh, by the way, there is no such thing as the liberal media. There is only the conservative...excuse me, I mean fascist media. Also, you suburbanites seem to think that because you live in the suburbs, drive an SUV, and have a big house means your part of the upper-class social elite. Guess what, you're not. Rich people don't work for other people, and they don't live in the suburbs. |
| bannonluke 12/17/02 . chapter 9 Another excellent chapter. Keep it up! |
| bannonluke 12/17/02 . chapter 8 Great again. Keep it up! |
| bannonluke 11/20/02 . chapter 7 An amazing chapter. Very detailed and I liked it. I thought it was typical of Torch to be watching Power Puff Girls. I was surprised at the mutated dreadnoks, but they were a good touch. I like your new characters, and the realism (e.g. people dying on both sides.) Keep it up. |
| bannonluke 11/20/02 . chapter 6 Great again. I like how you are developing new members for both Cobra and GI Joe, and while it is serious you have some funny one liners. I'm glad Beach Head's in it, he's one of the best Joes. |
| bannonluke 11/20/02 . chapter 5 Great chapter, dealing with the final destruction of the old Cobra regime to make place for this new one. And I was surprised at Scarlet knowing Johnathan. Keep up the excellent work. |
| bannonluke 11/12/02 . chapter 4 Fantastic. Keep it up! |
| bannonluke 11/12/02 . chapter 3 Fantastic chapter. Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. Please keep it up. |
| Colton Awards 2002 10/13/02 . chapter 11 Congratulations, you've been nominated in the Colton catagory of the First Annual Colton Awards for GI Joe Fanfiction.
Voting is underway until November 10th so please stop in and cast your votes today at:
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| Colton Awards 2002 10/13/02 . chapter 10 Congratulations, you've been nominated in the Medal of Honor catagory of the First Annual Colton Awards for GI Joe Fanfiction.
Voting is underway until November 10th so please stop in and cast your votes today at:
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