A great story. I liked the part where Sraa was comforting Gil after the case.

I liked it. You took some crative liberties with Grissom's emotions, and you carried it through, never taking either one of them OOC. Good work!

Great job with the story. I've often thought Grissom had a deep, dark side to him. Sara was very sympathetic and understanding, which I truly think she would be.

The story is so sad, but it is well constructed, worded and realistic.

GREAT I LOVED IT!
-MYSTICAL PANTHER

Wow - that was very intense and touching.
It's hard to write about such a dark and very sensitive issue, but you handled it extremly well.
Love it.

I think you left a beta comment in this paragraph by accident:

“Oh,” was his response, his eyes dropped back to the bar again, his shoulders slumped a little more as if he were comfortable enough with that explanation to relax a little. This is very much in the characterization of the show.

Cool. I really like it. Will there be more?

wow. phenomimal story.

AMAZING!

Gosh I love your fanfictions! the author allert for your new story really turned a crappy day into a good one! Thanks for that!
This story is great! I missed your stories, you are so talented, i hope you will write a lot more soon.
I really really like how you wrote them in this story, and I love the endig!
Amazing work!

kristy

Yeah, wow. This is dark, babe. You weren't kidding. You did a wonderful job with it and that poignancy that is your writing style does show through. But what's there more is this heartbreaking sadness and despair - even though you end it on a lighter note - the fact remains that there are evil, sick people out there. It's quite powerful and somewhat subtle at the same time. I feel all kinds of sadness now - which I'm sure is the desired intent.

Holy Snap that was great Wow ...Wow Gee I can't even tell you how this... Wow plz keep going

This was a great story.

There were a couple spots where you somehow left the beta's commentary in the story.

Otherwise, I liked it.

yeah, a bit graphic. i had to swallow a bit to take it.

good story. i might say you did it in just one chapter. most of the dailogues were in character, nicely done.