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Reviews For: The Beginning

snekochan
2008-04-16
ch 1,
abuseDid you have a second chapter to this posted somewhere? Because I'm sure I read a second chapter...*is confused* anyway, I really liked this! ^-^ You have good discription and your dialogue and character is well handled.
issues09
2006-06-17
ch 1,
abuseGreat job, it's good
Eiashian Lskyia Silver
2006-02-11
ch 1,
abuseWoah, this is the first story that is based around all of this. It's very good, and interesting, a lot because we never knew much about exactly what happened after. Chrono was haunting, and Remington seemed frantic, just as he would be. So you did very well with their characters.

Great job ^^. Keep it up.
Rakshasa
2006-02-05
ch 1, anon.
abusewow, that was neat. Part2??
raspberrysorbet
2006-02-02
ch 1,
abusedarn it! please update soon!great story!* cheers*
MisoGirl
2006-02-01
ch 1,
abuseIs Rosette gona show up in this fanfiction too?
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