Not bad. Read better.

At first, I wasn't gonna read this 'cause I haven't heard the song, but I saw your username. I love your Team Rocket site, so I decided to read this parody. It's great, and I'm glad I read it.

Hahaha, that's pretty good - I had to sing that song in choir last year, so I actuall;y knew the tune to sing it to... which was cool, but creepy in a way XD Any good word-play there

Bravo, bravo!
now ill have MEMORIES in my head

I LOVED IT! I love the Mario Brothers! Nintendo is the best for RPG's or ANY game for that matter! My friends don't agree . . . KEWL POEM!

*snif* it's SO TRUE! this is going on my favs list! you might like a parody i wrote for ninty too. very much related.