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| Declan Murphy 2008-08-10 ch 3, anon. | abuseI honestly liked reading this fanfiction. I like how the storyline flows smoothly and keeps you wanting to read more. I hope that you continue this story. |
| HarimaHige 2008-06-22 ch 3,  | abuseWhy not? Interessting so far. Hope to see more soon. |
| Bloodyredshade 2008-04-16 ch 3, | abuseit's o.k |
| nightwing27 2008-04-12 ch 3, | abuseman great chapter please don't stop it's getting good |
| nightwing27 2008-04-12 ch 2, | abuseman I feel sorry about motoko I hate to be her and naru |
| nightwing27 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseman nice start those two always treat him bad |
| kidcrud 2008-02-19 ch 3, | abusewow |
| Storyreader16 2008-01-26 ch 3, | abuseReally enjoy how this is going, please update! |
| Zero Asakura 2007-09-16 ch 3, | abusenice well... somehow i see Tsuruko struggling to get Motoko to accept an arranged marriage and both of them finding almost impossible to get Keitaro toaccept it... not so quickly at least uh... is that Keitaro married to Kanako and Motoko at the same time? |
| reikou 2007-08-11 ch 3, anon. | abuseplease continue this story I want to know what kitaro does to them! |
| RandomReview 2007-05-22 ch 3, anon. | abuseThe 4th unfinished Love Hina fic I've read from ya... As of my other reviews, the concept is really nice and you should update it =P Its easy to come up with a good story idea for the first couple of chapters, but you prove yourself as a writer if you can extend it while keeping your readers interested. |
| TsukamotoYamato 2007-05-17 ch 3, | abuseAw this ficcy is really good, please keep working on it^_^ And yeah, A7X rocks xD |
| Gunslinger Keitaro 2007-04-01 ch 3, | abuseTHREE CHEERS FOR SWEET REVENGE ! 1: HURRAY ! 2: HURRAY ! 3: HURRAY ! I always wanted to read this kind of fic... |
| Halo expert 2007-03-03 ch 3, | abuseI will be blunt, you really need to update this story. This is a very good story, but leaving it unfinished really gets on the readers' nerves. |
| Vilkath 2006-12-18 ch 3, | abuseYou must update!! hehe anyways.. To many things could happen in the next chapter. Keitaro going totaly evil and killing them all doesn't seem very apealing to me. Some the options I can imagine, Keitaro agree's to marry Motoko if for no other reason because he knows it's the worst punishment possible to her. To have to give herself up to a man, let alone him. Perhaps even include Tsuruko into the picture, maybe he rejects the first offer until Tsuruko adds herself, and then he accepts knowing they are the last of their family line. If he has them booth the clan name will die out. Still what ever he does or doesn't do to them, leaves the option of what will he do to Naru? Just as bad if not worse then anything Mokoto ever did. As much as I feel the girls deserve some punishment the real question will be, how dark do you want to go? He may have Kanko's love no matter what, but the question is how dark do you want to go? To dark and he will probably loose Shinobu and maybe Su's support. Of all the people in the house, he should still try to care about them. |